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Mcnuggets

Twenty piece chicken nuggets
Famished nine year old
Dipping in sweet and sour sauce
Don't let them get cold
Little belly's full
Child licks lips
Gone!

For Fast Food Epulaeryu Contest
April 27, 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown

May 7, 2011 at 6:52 AM

Congratulations Jason on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

May 7, 2011 at 2:20 AM

so delish, i want some.. happy kudos to you for the big mc win,kason! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

May 6, 2011 at 8:38 PM

wow, the judge sure likes Mcdonalds food!! And so do I!!! Congratulations, jason.

Samual Ronthorpe

May 6, 2011 at 3:08 PM

You captured that mood, perfectly. excellent job. Congrats.

Emma Buckeridge

May 6, 2011 at 12:42 PM

Oh yeas, this rings true with my kids too, congrats xx

Carrie Richards

May 6, 2011 at 12:36 PM

Oh yes.....the kids love'em!! Congratulations!!!!

Kash Poet

May 6, 2011 at 11:50 AM

This is wonderful!Congrats Jason on your win.

Gautami Phookan

May 6, 2011 at 11:15 AM

Congrats Jason on your well deserved win in this contest. That's really a lot of nuggets, a wonderful write, gautami

Gwendolen Song

May 6, 2011 at 7:47 AM

Hi Jason, You were 1 of 3 entries that wrote about their child --always my favorite angle. It is interesting to watch a child get excited about their drive thru treat..then the excitement wears off as the belly gets full...then they lick their lips! I tho't this was adorable. (20 pieces for a 9 yr old? Wow! Must be a pee wee football pro!) High 5 ! Gwendolen