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Mcnuggets

Twenty piece chicken nuggets Famished nine year old Dipping in sweet and sour sauce Don't let them get cold Little belly's full Child licks lips Gone! For Fast Food Epulaeryu Contest April 27, 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/7/2011 6:52:00 AM

Congratulations Jason on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/7/2011 2:20:00 AM

so delish, i want some.. happy kudos to you for the big mc win,kason! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2011 8:38:00 PM

wow, the judge sure likes Mcdonalds food!! And so do I!!! Congratulations, jason.

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 5/6/2011 3:08:00 PM

You captured that mood, perfectly. excellent job. Congrats.

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 5/6/2011 12:42:00 PM

Oh yeas, this rings true with my kids too, congrats xx

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/6/2011 12:36:00 PM

Oh yes.....the kids love'em!! Congratulations!!!!

Kash Poet

Date: 5/6/2011 11:50:00 AM

This is wonderful!Congrats Jason on your win.

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/6/2011 11:15:00 AM

Congrats Jason on your well deserved win in this contest. That's really a lot of nuggets, a wonderful write, gautami

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/6/2011 7:47:00 AM

Hi Jason, You were 1 of 3 entries that wrote about their child --always my favorite angle. It is interesting to watch a child get excited about their drive thru treat..then the excitement wears off as the belly gets full...then they lick their lips! I tho't this was adorable. (20 pieces for a 9 yr old? Wow! Must be a pee wee football pro!) High 5 ! Gwendolen

Shani Fassbender

Date: 4/27/2011 12:19:00 PM

Sounds like my son! Good write!