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Mcnuggets

Twenty piece chicken nuggets
Famished nine year old
Dipping in sweet and sour sauce
Don't let them get cold
Little belly's full
Child licks lips
Gone!

For Fast Food Epulaeryu Contest
April 27, 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/7/2011 6:52:00 AM Congratulations Jason on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/7/2011 2:20:00 AM so delish, i want some.. happy kudos to you for the big mc win,kason! :) huggs! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/6/2011 8:38:00 PM wow, the judge sure likes Mcdonalds food!! And so do I!!! Congratulations, jason. Login to Reply

Samual Ronthorpe Date: 5/6/2011 3:08:00 PM You captured that mood, perfectly. excellent job. Congrats. Login to Reply

Emma Buckeridge Date: 5/6/2011 12:42:00 PM Oh yeas, this rings true with my kids too, congrats xx Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 5/6/2011 12:36:00 PM Oh yes.....the kids love'em!! Congratulations!!!! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/6/2011 11:50:00 AM This is wonderful!Congrats Jason on your win. Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 5/6/2011 11:15:00 AM Congrats Jason on your well deserved win in this contest. That's really a lot of nuggets, a wonderful write, gautami Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 5/6/2011 7:47:00 AM Hi Jason, You were 1 of 3 entries that wrote about their child --always my favorite angle. It is interesting to watch a child get excited about their drive thru treat..then the excitement wears off as the belly gets full...then they lick their lips! I tho't this was adorable. (20 pieces for a 9 yr old? Wow! Must be a pee wee football pro!) High 5 ! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Shani Fassbender Date: 4/27/2011 12:19:00 PM Sounds like my son! Good write! Login to Reply