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Mcdonald's To Mom: Bug Off

McDonald’s To Mom – Bug Off By Elton Camp In Arizona, disgraceful conduct is being seen Because a parent wants McDonalds kept clean Filth in the play areas Dr. Carr-Jordan found The places refused to take action that is sound She gave them notice and a chance to get clean But days later the same conditions were seen What she found was rotting food, dirt and hair Such disgusting stuff was found most everywhere Due to that, for dangerous bacteria she did check What she found, children’s health could wreck The germs that she found could such as these Meningitis, nausea and gastrointestinal disease McDonald’s, instead of working to get it clean Ordered her out, not wanting a customer so mean You would think her feedback they would extol Maybe even employ her to bring infection control But if they do nothing or take action far too late It certainly seems to invite regulation from the state

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Date: 10/28/2011 4:31:00 PM
dang... i thought regulation was outa favor... but then i don't really keep up with the popular culture so who'm i to say. Dig the po, Elton, hope your weekend's a beauty one~N
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Date: 10/28/2011 1:49:00 PM
Ha,ha I'm sure it will happen....Good write
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Date: 10/28/2011 5:20:00 PM
Already has. This write is nonfiction. Google it and see! Thanks for reading and commenting. Elton

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