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Oh McDonald's You’re the happy death of me Your sweet, creamy chocolate covered Dip vanilla ice-cream cones are the best Oh McDonald's You’re the happy death of me That Big Mac With double beef patties Double cheese Lettuce, pickles, onions Mingled with special recipe sauce On a sesame seed bun Just melts in my mouth For a yummy, happy tummy Oh McDonald's You’re the happy death of me Those Golden scrunches crisp French fries Just jumps out at me And say,“Eat Me” Those Golden arches are my roads sign For all my satisfying needs 6/4/2015 Contest Name: Sing Me.. A JINGLE! Sponsor: Lyric Man

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/19/2015 4:19:00 PM

Entertaining jingle, Eve! We keep repeating that fast foods are unhealthy, yet we can't help eating them; may we all die happy with a full tummy:) Congrats on a deserved win. hugs // paul

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 2:46:00 PM

Good one Eve... SK

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/19/2015 12:45:00 AM

Congrats, Eve. (This is a drive-thru comment)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/18/2015 4:19:00 PM

Congrats Eve on this great win

Eve Roper
Date: 7/18/2015 4:57:00 PM

Thank you dear friend

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 7/18/2015 3:02:00 PM

oh the good old days 15cent hamburgers, I am very disappointed MickeyD's changed their buildings to a block house with token arches. Well done and congrats

Eve Roper
Date: 7/18/2015 3:25:00 PM

Thank you, Robert, yes it seems like everybody's prices have gone up. Thank you for the compliment and the congratulations hugs Eve

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/18/2015 2:41:00 PM

Wonderful piece,Eve.Congrats on your superb win in this contest....xoxo...

Eve Roper
Date: 7/18/2015 3:26:00 PM

Olusegun, thank you very much for the congratulations and your support hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/18/2015 2:26:00 PM

Eve,this is a great jingle. Congratualations on your awesome win :-)Alexis

Eve Roper
Date: 7/18/2015 3:27:00 PM

Alexis, thank you for the congratulations and your supportive support hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2015 1:37:00 PM

A great jingle Eve many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2015 3:32:00 PM

We have one Mcdonald's on the Island I go maybe once a year if that:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 7/18/2015 3:28:00 PM

Thank you, Jan, I don't think that I would've been able to write it except it's my favorite place to eat, besides Olive Gardens. Hugs Eve

Constance La France

Date: 6/6/2015 9:55:00 PM

Eve, a wonderful jingle, a7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, for rent

Constance La France
Date: 7/18/2015 4:09:00 PM

What? Oh that's terrible, I better check mine

Eve Roper
Date: 7/18/2015 3:30:00 PM

Hello Constance, I saw this morning that some way or another this website purged all of my comments and quite a few poems. Sorry for the late response and thank you. Hugs Eve

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/4/2015 11:12:00 PM

If you come to visit Canada, I will take you to McDonalds!!!!! LOL

Eve Roper
Date: 6/5/2015 7:38:00 AM

Thank you, Arthur, you know how to reach my heart. My husband gets so mad at me for not eating properly, the hamburger are going to be my end. Hugs Eve

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 6/4/2015 10:39:00 PM

Lol, you could sell that to McDonald's, Eve. A jingle comes to my head "Oh McDonald's has an ice cream cone, made it just for me. Comes the burgers, comes the fries, carry me out of here. Don't want no whopper, Big Mac is for me. Sundaes, pies, pile all up on me. Now it's time for me to really go." You like that? Haha

Eve Roper
Date: 6/4/2015 10:41:00 PM

I love it, Toquyen, thank you for visiting and reading my work. Hugs Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/4/2015 10:15:00 PM

Wow its so tempting Eve!! Gl in contest!

Eve Roper
Date: 6/4/2015 10:24:00 PM

Thank you, Dr Upma, I figure I'd give it a try. Hugs eve