Eve Roper Poet Lyric

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Mcdonald's

Oh McDonald's
You’re the happy death of me
Your sweet, creamy chocolate covered 
Dip vanilla ice-cream cones are the best

Oh McDonald's
You’re the happy death of me
That Big Mac 
With double beef patties
 Double cheese
Lettuce, pickles, onions
Mingled with special recipe sauce
On a sesame seed bun
Just melts in my mouth 
For a yummy, happy tummy

Oh McDonald's
You’re the happy death of me
 Those Golden scrunches crisp French fries
Just jumps out at me 
And say,“Eat Me”
Those Golden arches are my roads sign
 For all my satisfying needs

6/4/2015

Contest Name: Sing Me.. A JINGLE! 
Sponsor: Lyric Man

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Paul Callus July 19, 2015 at 4:19 PM Entertaining jingle, Eve! We keep repeating that fast foods are unhealthy, yet we can't help eating them; may we all die happy with a full tummy:) Congrats on a deserved win. hugs // paul

Skat A July 19, 2015 at 2:46 PM Good one Eve... SK

Viv Wigley July 19, 2015 at 12:45 AM Congrats, Eve. (This is a drive-thru comment)

Tim Smith July 18, 2015 at 4:19 PM Congrats Eve on this great win Eve Roper July 18, 2015 at 4:57 PM Thank you dear friend

Robert Stoner Jr July 18, 2015 at 3:02 PM oh the good old days 15cent hamburgers, I am very disappointed MickeyD's changed their buildings to a block house with token arches. Well done and congrats Eve Roper July 18, 2015 at 3:25 PM Thank you, Robert, yes it seems like everybody's prices have gone up. Thank you for the compliment and the congratulations hugs Eve

Olusegun Arowolo July 18, 2015 at 2:41 PM Wonderful piece,Eve.Congrats on your superb win in this contest....xoxo... Eve Roper July 18, 2015 at 3:26 PM Olusegun, thank you very much for the congratulations and your support hugs Eve

Alexis Y. July 18, 2015 at 2:26 PM Eve,this is a great jingle. Congratualations on your awesome win :-)Alexis Eve Roper July 18, 2015 at 3:27 PM Alexis, thank you for the congratulations and your supportive support hugs Eve

Jan Allison July 18, 2015 at 1:37 PM A great jingle Eve many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Jan Allison July 18, 2015 at 3:32 PM We have one Mcdonald's on the Island I go maybe once a year if that:-) Hugs Jan xx Eve Roper July 18, 2015 at 3:28 PM Thank you, Jan, I don't think that I would've been able to write it except it's my favorite place to eat, besides Olive Gardens. Hugs Eve

Constance La France June 6, 2015 at 9:55 PM Eve, a wonderful jingle, a7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, for rent Constance La France July 18, 2015 at 4:09 PM What? Oh that's terrible, I better check mine Eve Roper July 18, 2015 at 3:30 PM Hello Constance, I saw this morning that some way or another this website purged all of my comments and quite a few poems. Sorry for the late response and thank you. Hugs Eve

Arthur Vaso June 4, 2015 at 11:12 PM If you come to visit Canada, I will take you to McDonalds!!!!! LOL Eve Roper June 5, 2015 at 7:38 AM Thank you, Arthur, you know how to reach my heart. My husband gets so mad at me for not eating properly, the hamburger are going to be my end. Hugs Eve

Toquyen Harrell June 4, 2015 at 10:39 PM Lol, you could sell that to McDonald's, Eve. A jingle comes to my head "Oh McDonald's has an ice cream cone, made it just for me. Comes the burgers, comes the fries, carry me out of here. Don't want no whopper, Big Mac is for me. Sundaes, pies, pile all up on me. Now it's time for me to really go." You like that? Haha Eve Roper June 4, 2015 at 10:41 PM I love it, Toquyen, thank you for visiting and reading my work. Hugs Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 4, 2015 at 10:15 PM Wow its so tempting Eve!! Gl in contest! Eve Roper June 4, 2015 at 10:24 PM Thank you, Dr Upma, I figure I'd give it a try. Hugs eve