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Mazes

The sun closes in on itself imploding. Storm clouds clots like cream. The sky tinged a rancid yellow of dream raises tornadoes like totems scolding. A wet haze weeps through the pine trees furthering the sky’s somber malaise. Life, a missing actor on the stage, the rare and ripest red of blood, ceases. Yet, the bole of trees carved, coalesces to form the winged memory of bird, man and bear, letting all of those who have forgotten stare upon the aged markers of clans long gone. And so life, death and the day end eternally glazed making way for rain-bowed hues within the maze. Poet: D. Guzzi Date: 8/13/11

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Date: 8/13/2011 4:30:00 PM
Such a precious and complementary piece of commentary....But, where is my rhyme! I like a little rhyme with my wine-ning....When you can't fight the feeling then life just seem's to go on....Light and Lovely,, Nice write-up: Kiss, Kiss,Kiss-up! Your friend in the pen/G,FIELDS
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/13/2011 4:56:00 PM
the rhyme pattern is a/b/b/a ending with a/a

Book: Shattered Sighs