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His introduction is a roundabout in continuous turning this criminal sees me as one whose deep thinking is lost crazy assurances of converting a piece of grass to a garden obese rewards only can be reached through a hidden maze half evidences and my appetite slips through dark paths it’s obvious, the trail of a scammer’s conversation stays sinuous money, war, death, power, assistance: information in constant twisting without harbouring greed, one cannot be trapped wisdom cracks crookedness to put an end to this unwarranted puzzle he’s gutted; not giving my account details was the wall. Published: 6/25/2020 For "Maze- 10 word challenge poetry contest" Sponsored by A Dear Heart The 10 words: garden, maze, paths, sinuous, turning, trapped, puzzle, twisting, lost, wall Placement: 3rd Position [6/30/2020]

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Date: 8/13/2020 5:40:00 PM
Good metaphor and imagery in this. Well done.
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Date: 7/3/2020 5:39:00 AM
Gorgeous ink my friend. Gorgeous ink!
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren
Date: 7/2/2020 12:31:00 AM
Interesting and deep. Deception is almost always a maze of tricks and turns and lies. Good luck in the contest, Funom. :D
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:19:00 AM
Yes Carole, thank you so much for your wonderful comment.
Date: 7/1/2020 11:52:00 PM
Funom, this was a very creative direction to go with this set of intriguing words - the words of a con artist, a politician maybe? Most interesting write, full of depth. Congrats on your win, my friend ~ John
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:19:00 AM
Sure John, you couldn't have said it better. Thank you so much for your comment.
Date: 7/1/2020 10:16:00 PM
Congrats for your win, my friend.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea
Date: 7/1/2020 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations, dear friend on your wonderful win with this awesome piece! Well done and bravo! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:18:00 AM
Heeeeey Pandita Sanchez... It's been a long while. How are you? Have you been around? It's good to read from you once again. This is my pleasure.
Date: 7/1/2020 3:39:00 PM
Funom, congratulations on your win in my maze contest with this wonderful poem _Constance
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Constance.
Date: 7/1/2020 2:33:00 PM
A completely unique approach on the theme Funom! Kudos to you for writing this. Your words maintain that mystery till the end. Congratulations on your win. Blessings :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Aditi
Date: 7/1/2020 12:48:00 AM
wisdom cracks crookedness..A totally different approach.. Great win Funom..Congrats..
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Jenish
Date: 6/30/2020 11:58:00 PM
Enjoyed each line. Congrats Funom to win. Blessing
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/17/2020 6:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Anisha
Date: 6/30/2020 2:56:00 PM
Funom, enjoyed reading your idea of maze. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/30/2020 4:52:00 PM
Thank you very much my dear Eve
Date: 6/27/2020 4:11:00 PM
You have a very clever mind, Funon. What a turning direction you took this challenge!
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/29/2020 3:22:00 PM
Hehehehe.... Thank you so much Andre
Date: 6/27/2020 12:16:00 PM
A fantastic line, "wisdom cracks crookedness to put an end to this unwarranted puzzle"; good luck in the contest!
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/29/2020 3:22:00 PM
Thank you so much M.L. Kiser
Date: 6/26/2020 12:38:00 AM
Funom it is a maze metaphorically speaking. Clever piece my friend...
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/29/2020 3:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Michael
Date: 6/25/2020 2:58:00 PM
Hello Funom Makama, I found this to be interesting. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/25/2020 5:28:00 PM
You are welcome Funom enjoy your evening my friend.
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 4:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Darlene
Date: 6/25/2020 2:47:00 PM
Very nicely done, Funom--you blended the words seamlessly.
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 4:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay
Date: 6/25/2020 6:38:00 AM
A gem indeed... Best wishes for the contest. Love and prayers for you and God bless you, Gina
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Regina Riddle