Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Maze

Where did the paths take you,                                                                                      turning and twisting to a great view.                                                                                           

Thought I was trapped,                                                                                                  then I realized I had been kidnapped.                                                                                 

Kidnapped in the garden of beauty,                                                                              I got lost in the scent that was fruity.  

I hit a wall of ivy,                                                                                                          then sinuous I took another look more wisely. 

This puzzle is a huge maze,                                                                                          I thought I would be here for many days.
 

Date Written: 6/22/2020

5 Place       Maze - 10 Word Challenge Contest Judged:6/30/2020       
Sponsored by:     A Dear Heart

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John Watt July 2, 2020 at 2:27 AM Paula, nice one for the contest, and done in only 10 lines. Enjoyed the read, congratulations on your win ~ John Paula Goldsmith July 2, 2020 at 10:10 AM Thank You, for reading, writing and your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day writing away.............

Constance La France July 1, 2020 at 3:43 PM Paula, congratulations on your win in my maze contest _Constance Paula Goldsmith July 1, 2020 at 5:59 PM Thank You, for writing and your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day.............

Aditi Mishra July 1, 2020 at 2:47 PM I love your witty and soothing muse Paula. Your words bring a smile on my face with your creativity. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)

Jenish Somadas July 1, 2020 at 12:59 AM Kidnapped in the garden of beauty,.. Beautifully penned.. Congrats Paula.. Paula Goldsmith July 1, 2020 at 1:50 PM Thank You, for writing and your congrats. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day.............

Regina Mcintosh June 22, 2020 at 1:22 PM Excellent use of the words. Wish you a win. Blessings dear friend and happy writing. Love and prayers sent your way, Gina Paula Goldsmith June 22, 2020 at 1:28 PM Thank You, for your note and wishes. I really needed to see your note. Have a blessed day............