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Maytime Magic Haiku

Strolling into Spring Sweet, sauntering, serene Sunkist sparrow sings 5/1/2023
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Kauffman Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 3:10 PM
I think you've got the hang of it Pangie! Beautiful images! Delicious alliteration! Thanks for sharing this haiku delight! Blessings!
Romios Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 6:22 PM
I hope I do, Sam, I was not sure about alliteration in a Haiju. Bit Ithink it worked. Your support is greatly appreciated. Blessings ~~~ Pangie
Cunningham Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 11:43 PM
A well written haiku with alliteration, not an easy task. Tom
Romios Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 6:18 PM
Tom, sorry late in responding,,,, I loved writing this one,,,and loved the image, Blessings, Pangie.
Mchattie Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 3:30 PM
Nicely penned my friend. Your picture is awash in color. Beautiful.
Romios Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 4:01 PM
Greetings, David! I love that picture so much, I wanted to walk into it!! I rarely like my Haikus. This One? I did. And am honored by your visit and scintillating share. Pangie
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 3:28 PM
Hello Panagiota, yes I like the poem. I can hear the sparrow sing. Hugs./Darlene\xxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 10:16 AM
Hello Panagiota,, I will be working on a poem today. It has not warmed up yet. Still on the cold side. I am working on a pem later. Hugs. /Darlene\ xxx
Romios Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 3:57 PM
Hello, Darlene. Happy Sunday be yours. I do hope your weather warms up! 75 degrees here. Sunny, nice. Working on next poem..picture, no poem? Hope to get a respectable poem complete in a few hours. Hugs, Pangie xxx
Delaney-Barron Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 2:38 PM
Haiku with so much alliteration! Beautiful! I see the sunlit sparrow!
Romios Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 3:00 PM
Fran, I thank you. Let’s pretend we are running after the sparrow! Thank you for the visit. Flowers for you, Pangie
Goldsmith Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 1:56 PM
Love your May write/picture. Enjoy your day/week.............
Romios Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 2:20 PM
Hugs to you, poetess and friend! Thank you for the wonderful prayer you sent me last week,and the comment, today. You have such class, do you know that? You are simply amazing. May blessings to all… Pangie
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