JC Brul Poet Haiku

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For Brian Strand's Your Choice X Poetry Contest 11 June 2025

Mayon Volcano Hiku

                                             ^
              ~    ~    ~      ^      y    ~ 
                  ~    ~        y        ~    ~
                 ~                  
             ^                     gigantic cone plays
        /        \       hide-and-seek with summer clouds ~ 
     /              \          teasing kites adrift 
  /                    \
*  ~    ~      ~     *

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Valsa George June 12, 2025 at 8:44 PM Your hikus are perfectly thought out and unique, dear Jez. Great pictorial representation. With simple strokes, you have done it. Congratulations on your great win. You are always a winner in Brian's contest.

Kim Rodrigues June 12, 2025 at 1:39 PM Pretty! Congrats!

Linda Alice Fowler June 12, 2025 at 11:16 AM Love this JCB!! Picture perfect. Congrats on top placement! :)

Sotto Poet June 12, 2025 at 9:22 AM Well composed and presented. Congrats on your win, and thanks for your visit and comment