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Maybe Together We Can Do It All

when part of me had died
i thought the world
had nothing left to offer me
and then i met you ~



AP: Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 11:07 AM
Needle pointing up!!! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 3:12 PM
ha ha ~ thanks, Gershon
Seeker Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 1:52 AM
Beautiful! :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 4:53 AM
Thank you very much ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 3:26 PM
Hello Lin, oh this is lovely. A lovely surprise. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 10:25 AM
Hello Lin, I hope all is well with you. Hugs. You are welcome.
Gauthier Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 3:38 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene ~
Faulkner Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 3:21 PM
Sweet and hopeful :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 3:37 PM
Thanks, Michelle ~
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