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Maybe the Grass Is Greener

It's said, the grass is greener on the other side
The world as we know, split into two dimensions
To find this wonderful place, I will make great strides
It's exact location, has yet to be mentioned

Imagining, everything will end happily No need to worry, over stress and agony The anger and sadness, will bother us no more Opportunity's, will be knocking at the door
I can only speculate, what delights await We might live together, in peace and harmony Maybe there, colors and sizes won't alienate A better life, we all should get a chance to see
I will continue to pray, that my chance will come For maybe then, a better man I will become
5/6/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hamilton Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 3:23 PM
Really nice write Jeremy, positive vibe, and true to form, excellent! Fyi final couplet has same rhyme word try to avoid repetition, and you will improve!
Palli Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 11:14 AM
Beautiful words, Jeremy. Nice write!
Smith Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 11:16 AM
Thank you Susan!!
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May 7, 2017 at 4:13 AM
A beautiful sonnet, Jeremy, it is so hopeful and positive. I'll write you soupmail too :)
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