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Maybe Spring

The purple ground cover came up overnight
Miraculously covering the yard in blankets
I step gingerly, coaxing winter daisies to take a hint
Sidestep a teeny white violet, a motorcycle sound in the distance.

Copyright © Caren Krutsinger | Year Posted 2019

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/8/2019 7:21:00 PM So cute and you bring us into your world with the sound of a motorcycle. Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/9/2019 12:10:00 AM When I hear that sound, I know it truly IS spring!

Ilene Bauer Date: 4/8/2019 4:36:00 PM delightfully written, caren! Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/9/2019 12:11:00 AM Thank you Ilene. I sat out in the sun on a 75 degree day and wrote 23 poems in a row.

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/8/2019 3:49:00 PM ohh, am liking the charmed surprise of spring's arrival... very good one, caren!..huggs Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/9/2019 12:11:00 AM Thank you Nette. You know it is weird but until you hear the motorcycle, it does not quite feel like spring yet.

David Mchattie Date: 4/8/2019 2:56:00 PM The first signs of spring are a wonderful moment. Have a great day. Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/9/2019 12:11:00 AM Thank you David. I shall. I will. I do. I did.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 4/8/2019 7:21:00 AM 'coaxing winter daisies to take a hint' Awesome line. and a very vivid picture Caren. Nicely done. Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/8/2019 8:19:00 AM Thank you my friend.

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 4/8/2019 5:40:00 AM there has come the spring with poetic loving mind/// Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/8/2019 8:19:00 AM Ah, thank you my friend.