Caren Krutsinger Poet Blank verse

Maybe Spring

The purple ground cover came up overnight
Miraculously covering the yard in blankets
I step gingerly, coaxing winter daisies to take a hint
Sidestep a teeny white violet, a motorcycle sound in the distance.

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Kim Rodrigues April 8, 2019 at 7:21 PM So cute and you bring us into your world with the sound of a motorcycle. Caren Krutsinger April 9, 2019 at 12:10 AM When I hear that sound, I know it truly IS spring!

Ilene Bauer April 8, 2019 at 4:36 PM delightfully written, caren! Caren Krutsinger April 9, 2019 at 12:11 AM Thank you Ilene. I sat out in the sun on a 75 degree day and wrote 23 poems in a row.

Nette Onclaud April 8, 2019 at 3:49 PM ohh, am liking the charmed surprise of spring's arrival... very good one, caren!..huggs Caren Krutsinger April 9, 2019 at 12:11 AM Thank you Nette. You know it is weird but until you hear the motorcycle, it does not quite feel like spring yet.

David Mchattie April 8, 2019 at 2:56 PM The first signs of spring are a wonderful moment. Have a great day. Caren Krutsinger April 9, 2019 at 12:11 AM Thank you David. I shall. I will. I do. I did.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. April 8, 2019 at 7:21 AM 'coaxing winter daisies to take a hint' Awesome line. and a very vivid picture Caren. Nicely done. Caren Krutsinger April 8, 2019 at 8:19 AM Thank you my friend.

Mahtab Bangalee April 8, 2019 at 5:40 AM there has come the spring with poetic loving mind/// Caren Krutsinger April 8, 2019 at 8:19 AM Ah, thank you my friend.