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Maybe Spring

The purple ground cover came up overnight Miraculously covering the yard in blankets I step gingerly, coaxing winter daisies to take a hint Sidestep a teeny white violet, a motorcycle sound in the distance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/8/2019 7:21:00 PM
So cute and you bring us into your world with the sound of a motorcycle.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2019 12:10:00 AM
When I hear that sound, I know it truly IS spring!
Date: 4/8/2019 4:36:00 PM
delightfully written, caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2019 12:11:00 AM
Thank you Ilene. I sat out in the sun on a 75 degree day and wrote 23 poems in a row.
Date: 4/8/2019 3:49:00 PM
ohh, am liking the charmed surprise of spring's arrival... very good one, caren!..huggs
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2019 12:11:00 AM
Thank you Nette. You know it is weird but until you hear the motorcycle, it does not quite feel like spring yet.
Date: 4/8/2019 2:56:00 PM
The first signs of spring are a wonderful moment. Have a great day.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2019 12:11:00 AM
Thank you David. I shall. I will. I do. I did.
Date: 4/8/2019 7:21:00 AM
'coaxing winter daisies to take a hint' Awesome line. and a very vivid picture Caren. Nicely done.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/8/2019 8:19:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 4/8/2019 5:40:00 AM
there has come the spring with poetic loving mind///
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/8/2019 8:19:00 AM
Ah, thank you my friend.

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