Maybe, Not Just a One Night Stand - For Contest

"I'll cook you dinner, and breakfast is on me" .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 6, 2015 at 10:02 AM
James :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*
Fraser Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 11:41 AM
Thank you SKAT, love this fun contest, cool concept, smiles, James :)
A   Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 9:24 AM
OO, James, now that is the perfect way into a womens heart.. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~
Fraser Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Thank you kindly PD, and it made it's mark, smiles, James :) :)
Kiser Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 5:48 AM
I'm waiting...well done.
Fraser Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 3:04 PM
Dinners simmering MLK, when you arrive, I'll be in the kitchen ;-) thanks kindly for your wonderful support, for I smile widely at your visits, James :) :)
Roberts Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 1:51 AM
Wow James was an offer any sensible girl wouldnt refuse.....Well done ......Seren Oops maybe congrats is more appropriate than well done lol.
Fraser Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 2:55 PM
Thank you kindly Seren, yep, she's a sensible girl and my flag she unfurled, hugs, James :) :)
Konos Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 9:10 PM
Clever.....Thank you for being in my contest
Fraser Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 1:59 PM
Hi Judy, thank you so much for recognising my poem. Loved the concept of your contest, smiles, James :)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 7:51 PM
Good one James.
Fraser Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 1:46 PM
Thank you kindly Richard, much appreciated, James :)
Ryerson Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:08 PM
What was for breakfast? (One can only imagine) VERY funny and original James! Congratulations and did it work? - Tim
Fraser Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 1:32 PM
Hiya Tim, breakfast was ;-) does that answer your Q? I'm smiling widely seeing you here at my poetry, always welcome, smiles, James :) :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:06 PM
Good one, and big congrats, James.
Fraser Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 1:12 PM
Thank you kindly Andrea, smiles, James :) :)
Roper Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations on your win! Blessings Eve
Fraser Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 1:03 PM
Many thanks Eve, much appreciated, blessings, James.
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Dropping back with my congrats James:-) Hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 3:22 PM
I'm smiling as I so enjoyed writing this for Judy's contest. Thanks kindly Jan, hugs, James xx
Nunez Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 1:13 PM
lol! Cute... If I'm right about what I seem to understand from comments below, here's hoping to more dinners, breakfasts and lunches for both of you! Kim :)
Fraser Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 1:24 PM
Thank you kindly Kim, I pray to God that he blesses us with such. Wishing you a lovely day ahead, James :)
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 3:58 PM
lol:-) Hugs Jan wonder if it has worked for you lol:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 4:11 PM
aww am glad James:-) Hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 4:05 PM
I reciprocate my comment on Casarah's below. Indeed, I bought breakfast on more than one occasion, and I'd do it again every time we're together on vacation, why, because she's worth it // hugs // James xxxx
Nance Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 2:16 PM
Who could say no to that! :)
Fraser Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 3:08 PM
Thank you Casarah. I haven't cooked the dinner, but breakfast has been on me recently. Blessed day to you, smiles, James :) :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 2:16 PM
hmm, you seem to be an expert on such attractive liners, prince... wonderfully done!,, huggs
Fraser Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 2:53 PM
I've penned a few Princess, but one last year totally captured my heart. One day soon it'll be revealed, and it wasn't me who penned it ;-) hugs always // James :) :)
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