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Maybe, I Love You

Inferno Entry Soul’s window Liquid satin Blanketing sin Unintentional embrace Spoken word Spoken soft Spoken Whisper Speechless Longing Longing Tears Held Hold me Hold me As if God Condemned our tomorrows Suddenly Ventricle screams Smile rediscovered Eyes unwrapped Even after all these years Rush Waves Crash Song of infant Church Bells Desired Discovery This belief That maybe Just maybe… © Drake J. Eszes

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Kim Van Breda

Date: 9/11/2015 11:08:00 AM

And... another stunner from your pen.. love the pauses in this write.. you certainly have a way with words ~~X~~

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/11/2015 11:18:00 AM

I do what I can. :) Silence & all...thank you so much, Kim!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/20/2013 9:58:00 PM

Sweet....intense...padsionate....

Poet Tacito
Date: 8/21/2013 7:53:00 AM

That's how I roll. :) Thank you, Eileen!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/8/2013 3:51:00 PM

Just maybe...Just beautiful-'Unintentional embrace..Somehow makes me think of Pablo Neruda s verse.'Maybe i love you without knowing how when or where' : ).'Do you know Pablo?Pablo Neruda and Rumi..two of my favourite writers..except another favourite-That s Drake : ).Soft..romantic..full of yearning for love..Parapapapa-Im lovin it : )

Poet Tacito
Date: 7/8/2013 3:57:00 PM

I know of Neruda very, very well. He was a hell of a poet. Rumi, as well. And LOL for the McDonalds reference!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHHA! You're too sweet, Charmaine! Thank you darling!

Jiril Clemons

Date: 5/22/2013 11:25:00 AM

Excellent poem Drake. I really enjoyed it, my name is Jiril Clemons. Check out some of my poetry. You might like it.

Poet Tacito
Date: 5/22/2013 11:28:00 AM

Thanks much, Jiril. Will do! Cheers!

Green Trees

Date: 2/21/2012 9:59:00 PM

excellent poetry..enjoyed the read, :) take care drake

Poet Tacito
Date: 2/22/2012 7:40:00 AM

Hi there! Why thank you very much! =)

Jessica Woolum

Date: 12/8/2011 6:36:00 AM

This is so amazing! I love how you are so skillful with your words! Beautiful piece!

Poet Tacito
Date: 12/8/2011 9:03:00 PM

Hey Jessica! That is very kind of you to say. Thank you so so much. =)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/24/2011 11:56:00 AM

Awesome verse Drake, emotions leave one feeling spent.

Poet Tacito
Date: 8/24/2011 1:06:00 PM

Heh, you got that right. Spent to the point of being "broke". :) Thank you so very much for that, Elizabeth.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/21/2011 9:52:00 AM

I really liked how you ended this, Drake! Leaves so much to winder about-- I really enjoyed reading this, what a ride-- I do think the short lines here worked to the advantage of your poem, very cool how you wrote this! Thank you for dropping by my ballsy poem, lol bouncy, bouncy indeed :D Happy you enjoyed it :D Have a good week

Poet Tacito
Date: 7/24/2011 10:51:00 AM

You're cute. LOL thank you for that! :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/20/2011 7:05:00 PM

maybe you should put Church Bells before Song of infant. john

Poet Tacito
Date: 7/24/2011 10:51:00 AM

I thought of that, but I decided to switch that up. Thank you for that though, John! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2011 7:48:00 PM

honestly.. you have a gift of the perfect words. I truly see you as knowing what you want... and thinking if it is good for you... you are awesome.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Poet Tacito
Date: 6/10/2011 4:17:00 AM

You know what, coming from you, that's truly something sweet. Extremely kind of you to say. You have me blushing. Thank you :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/5/2011 10:04:00 AM

Once again you did it Drake, absolutely love the roller coaster ride you took me on in this write.. Hope your weekend is a great one :)

Poet Tacito
Date: 6/5/2011 2:02:00 PM

WEEEEE for the roller coaster! Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/5/2011 10:00:00 AM

No maybe about it, Drake. This is love. When you've gone years between having someone special in your life, the romantic feeling is even stronger. Amazing use of the free verse form to convey your passion. Love, Carolyn

Poet Tacito
Date: 6/5/2011 2:02:00 PM

Yes, I couldn't agree more with you Carolyn. Couldn't agree more...thank you.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/5/2011 7:03:00 AM

wow, drake... a gentle explosion for the senses! the ending leaves much to ponder upon... dazzling! likey, likey much! :) huggs, nette

Poet Tacito
Date: 6/5/2011 2:00:00 PM

Yes, your perspective on my ending is what I was aiming for. Thank you & I'm very glad you likey!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/5/2011 6:50:00 AM

Nice therapeutic pauses with this form... Opened-ended questioning love. So lovely....so realistic. Glad you enjoyed the Fat sumo who split out his Speedo. ....PD said funny haiku and that's all I could conjure up that was funny at 3 a.m. Call me warped. Thanks for sharing your awesome poetry.NOW, go write some MORE. ENCORE! Gwendolen

Poet Tacito
Date: 6/5/2011 1:59:00 PM

Yes, well stated there Gwen. :) Thank you so very much! :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/5/2011 6:34:00 AM

Excellent poetry my friend....MJF

Poet Tacito
Date: 6/5/2011 6:38:00 AM

Hey Mike! Thank you so much! I do what I can. :)