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May the Road Never End

I Walked alone on a rainy day through an abandoned road, with lofty trees and bushes at the sides; No one ahead and no one behind; and I prayed "May the road never end" Bracing nimbus clouds spattered cool crystal drizzles and soft breeze pierced the bamboo stems, Raised beguiling flute music, made me pray "May the road never end" Slippery road embellished with fallen dry leaves,glittered; Stepped over colorful leaves to see the nearby trees, with ripened fruits and singing birds ;and I prayed "May the road never end" Raindrops from wet leaves hit my head;healed my wound Haunting scent from wild flowers spellbound and Cute prattle between flying squirrels,made me pray "May the road never end" A sudden gust of wind blew my black umbrella, and the impulsive rain drenched me, cleansed my soul and my hurdles flew away and I prayed "May the road never end" DEC-04-2017

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Date: 2/10/2018 10:15:00 PM
Oh such beautiful writing with a rhythmic and lyrical lilt, Supraja. Your refrain is captivating and the imagery and appreciation you express have a lovely spiritual tone. An amazing poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/8/2018 11:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Supraja ! Great poem and enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/5/2018 4:50:00 PM
Some amazing lines in this Supraja, I can see why you chose this one.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
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Date: 1/9/2018 11:08:00 AM
beautiful imagery sweet Supraja, congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/6/2018 7:17:00 PM
What a delightfully beautiful cleansing poem. Congrats on your win, Supraja. This is a FAVE for me, thank you.
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Date: 1/6/2018 9:17:00 AM
Loved this poem for it's lyrical feel Supraja, repeating lines are tantalizing, however in a free verse poem, repeating lines feel like a rhyme, so a lower placement is the result, in any other contest this would be a top winner
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Date: 1/6/2018 9:01:00 PM
Thank you so much John...So glad you liked it... Thank you for the placement... Oh, it's my mistake... I should have entered a pure free verse for this contest... That's ok... I will be more careful from now on... Thanks again...
Date: 12/6/2017 3:24:00 PM
Tis the road of life. and you have portrayed it beautifully!
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Date: 12/5/2017 7:01:00 AM
May it never end indeed. I enjoyed the walk with you, Supraja.
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Date: 12/5/2017 5:59:00 AM
A marvel of poetic imagery that makes the reader wish to read more my friend, Supraja! Wondrous!
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Date: 12/5/2017 1:21:00 AM
May your appreciation for the gifts we've been given always shine through. Beautiful and warming.
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Date: 12/4/2017 12:37:00 PM
- A colorful and beautiful poem, Supraja - Sounds peaceful and a lovely trip ... just to enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2017 10:13:00 AM
Indeed, Supraja, with all this beautiful imagery and healed heart/soul, who would want this journey to end! I'm tempted to come and retrace your steps. Regards // paul
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Date: 12/4/2017 9:15:00 AM
What a wonderful journey... excellent poem..
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Date: 12/4/2017 8:20:00 AM
Wow! I enjoyed the walk with you, Supraja:) beautiful writing:)
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Date: 12/4/2017 6:44:00 AM
Wonderful, didn't want the poem to end :)
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