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May Showers

Showers April brought to us - showers more than sun, and I just kept wondering when they would be done! May arrived and in the sky, clouds were dark with rain. Then it even snowed a bit. Nature seemed insane! My poor roses on the bush, still they haven’t bloomed. Yet today the sun came out, so they are not doomed. Just a few more sunny days - I might see flowers. Mother Nature, please, for now, delay May showers. Written 5/5/17 in 7/5 Trochee form (quatrain type not shown at Soup) For the May Showers Contest of Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 5/27/2017 1:30:00 AM
This is a nice one, my flowers started to open on my balcony. Then the rain came back. Thanks for liking my Veil poem. I was always interested in the veil :)
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Date: 5/26/2017 2:33:00 PM
Love your nature poems. You have a gift for bringing each season to life.
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Date: 5/14/2017 1:56:00 AM
I like it. We are in Germany, over from South Africa. Despite the showers, I love the weather her. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 5/12/2017 1:45:00 AM
Nice twist, Andrea. In England also people crave for sun-blessed mornings, and who wants to spoil the beautiful warmth !
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Date: 5/11/2017 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/11/2017 7:49:00 PM
Excellent! I am so impressed. A Fav.
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Date: 5/11/2017 1:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. We had lots of rain, too.
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Date: 5/11/2017 9:07:00 AM
I feel the same, too much rain in May:( Lovely poem Andrea.
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Date: 5/11/2017 3:26:00 AM
Coming back to you with congratulations Andrea, well deserved :)
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Date: 5/10/2017 11:22:00 PM
Non-stop rain is no good! Sunbless those roses and congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 5/10/2017 10:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 5/10/2017 8:29:00 PM
Nice placement, I actually enjoy the showers. Its the bugs afterwards that are no fun.
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Date: 5/10/2017 4:43:00 PM
So far no May showers but a lovely sunny day -a lovely spring poem. love phyl
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Date: 5/7/2017 6:13:00 PM
Very nicely done Andrea..GL in the contest
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Date: 5/7/2017 3:35:00 AM
I loved your Trochee Andrea! This wonderful form you created is a challenge but a pleasure to complete. Best of luck in the contest. 7 ; )
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Date: 5/7/2017 3:28:00 AM
Trochee is the meter, the point of stress, the accent in rhyme, just like Iamb, Anapest, Dactyl and so on. You have written a quatrain in trochee, I bow for you because that is not easy :) Greek and Arabic poetics and meter are my speciality, so I honestly love this!
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Date: 5/7/2017 1:48:00 AM
Its may and and it still wont stop raining!!!! HELP!!!!! we have the army coming in to help with flood damage!
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Date: 5/6/2017 10:06:00 PM
I'm ready for the flowers too, it's still pretty chilly up here though, I'll join you in the asking for sunshine. :) hugs
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Date: 5/6/2017 10:01:00 PM
Nice poetry Andrea, wish we had rain in April, we had a drought, we've started May with a couple showers, good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/6/2017 9:31:00 PM
How sweet,dear Andrea.. It got flavour and flow both... I am loving it.
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Date: 5/6/2017 2:21:00 PM
Nicely done, Andrea, but your talent always outshines ~*
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Date: 5/6/2017 1:08:00 PM
You process a poetic soul that breathes magic into your words, absorbing all the beauty of nature that surrounds you, whilst quietly dispersing this gift to others. Emile.
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Date: 5/6/2017 12:10:00 PM
delightful plea for the delay of showers, anie..well, light rainfall would not harm your blooms... how are you?.. hugggs
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Date: 5/6/2017 11:54:00 AM
Sweet....Andrea. Thanks for telling us the form you were using for this piece. I love May...I love showers...but I'll tell Mother Nature to keep an eye out for your roses. ;) Hugs
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Date: 5/6/2017 11:13:00 AM
I love it, But I will not be entering this contest I find nothing poetic in rain for I am a builder .. LOL :)
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