I Am Anaya Poet Rhyme

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For The Love Of May Poetry Contest
Sponsor Andrea Dietrich
1st Place

May It Be For Love

May, queen of blossoms, and fulfilling flowers, 
what pretty music shall we charm the hours?—Lord Edward Thurlow

Plucked are the petals one by one
daisy, dewy from misty May morn sun
Oh impermanence, I can’t envision                                                        
whimsy game of fate’s curious call                                      
whilst whispering, does he love me or not
passionately, madly, or even at all
fields of flowers plucked, forevers forgot              
Sun-faced floral, to what extent his heart?
Assuaged asway by unwavering love, 
I refrain from tearing petals apart 

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Karen Jones May 31, 2026 at 2:42 AM I love that you don’t tear petals apart! A lovely write with beautiful artwork as well! Congratulations on your much deserved win Anaya! I Am Anaya May 31, 2026 at 9:26 PM I have in the past. Taking walks & look only, at their beauty is really enough.Ty, KJ

Andrea Dietrich May 31, 2026 at 2:16 AM I love this one, Anaya. Can't believe I nearly left it off my list by forgetting to click yes to go on final round! I recently did a sijo on plucking daisies so this imagery really resonated with me. Congrats I Am Anaya May 31, 2026 at 9:29 PM Andrea, we appreciate your sponsoring such contests, I really enjoy yours. Ty, for the placement, & so pleased you enjoyed! I'll check your sijo. ;)

John Loving Iii May 15, 2026 at 2:19 PM Had to look at the title and it all fitted. good work. I Am Anaya May 15, 2026 at 2:31 PM The game "does he love me or does he not~ thanks, JL lii

Beryl Edmonds May 12, 2026 at 6:03 PM Petals must feel the pain, when torn apart, for what gain? Let the flowers grow and bloom, never to feel doom and gloom… Beryl I Am Anaya May 12, 2026 at 6:07 PM Beryl, That is so beautiful and just what I was expressing, you know that would make a good nature and healing quote!!!