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May I Have This Dance

amidst blades grasses
                                                 lily of the valley bows -
                                                  to winds king jester

imaginationinspirationalnatureseasonsvisionaryhaiku

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Brian Strand

Date: 6/14/2008 12:40:00 AM

Ah the music in nature Katherine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your comments

Michael Jordan

Date: 6/12/2008 6:52:00 AM

Katherine this is a great haiku and the title is perfect - tell Jenny we said hi and we love you guys Katherine - Stay Blessed dear friend

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/11/2008 9:55:00 AM

This is wonderful. I can see the imagery clearly. I can even hear the music playing in the wind. Great job! ~ Joseph

Milton Toran

Date: 6/11/2008 8:10:00 AM

The title is simply genius! Never would I have guessed that this is a haiku. Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. The second line's my favorite! Thank you for sharing! Milt

Farah Chamma

Date: 6/10/2008 11:19:00 PM

A wonderful imagery..Very creative indeed... Always, The young one, Farah

Marycile Beer

Date: 6/10/2008 7:08:00 PM

Hi Katherine, this is beautiful. We have lots of winds and so far I haven't had to start to water the yard. Don't look forward to that. Hope the kids can find a trailer that is second hand and we can move it out to their place and it would be paid for and no rent. They have a trailer also so I know what you are talking about. God Bless, Cile

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 6/10/2008 5:23:00 AM

Katherine, I do so lzuike this write, the natural flow and imagery within and the form, but may I ask, should "gester" be "gesture" or "jester"? In any case, it's an excellent write. Michael

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