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May Afternoon

A little sip of wine Out on the balcony A balmy spring breeze Stirs lilac blooms Diffusing perfume free Enraptured in a novel Through space and time Fine line between Reality and fantasy AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Front Page Pick 2020 Posted on July 17, 2019

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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 7/19/2019 10:18:00 AM
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Great space to be in - halfway between fantasy and reality - your poem is very creative and is a relaxing read Line, love it - hugs, Jennifer.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/19/2019 12:29:00 PM
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Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Jennifer.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/18/2019 8:40:00 PM
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This one rings all the bells, Line! I love the ultra-fine, shaky demarcation line between reality and fantasy. Beautifully done. Bravo! :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2019 8:50:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Gershon, for your lovely compliment. Most appreciated.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/18/2019 4:52:00 PM
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Loved your Comnent below...we are all delusional. You are a true talent here. What a great work of art.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2019 7:12:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Panagiota, for your lovely compliment.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/18/2019 4:33:00 PM
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Nice, you described perfectly that escape to the balcony and into that book!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2019 7:11:00 PM
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Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy. Most appreciated.
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DM Babbit
Date: 7/18/2019 1:27:00 PM
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Nice, so do we live in fantasy or reality? DMB
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2019 3:43:00 PM
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Most of us are delusional so I think you know the answer to that one. LOL
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/18/2019 7:25:00 AM
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Nicely written. I feel like I am there :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2019 7:44:00 AM
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There's enough wine for all my friends, Heidi.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/17/2019 9:48:00 PM
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Hey Line, this is such a nice scene...I could feel the spring breeze and smell the lilacs...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/17/2019 9:58:00 PM
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Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Jeanne.

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