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May 10th 2020

garden swing open parka and coffee parked bare toes in the grass

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/21/2020 11:05:00 PM

Really like this one, Maureen! Can feel the grass in between my toes. Congrat and kudos!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/22/2020 7:21:00 AM

Thank you Sam! My new ku guru is wearing off on me. I'm letting myself see them instead of forging them. Waiting on my second cup to return my toes to the grass right now... I hope you get a chance to do the same today :) xomo!

Gideon Idudje

Date: 5/21/2020 5:35:00 AM

Wow Congrat Such relishing Imageries Tart..

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/21/2020 8:40:00 AM

Thank you Gideon. ~ mo

John Watt

Date: 5/20/2020 11:07:00 PM

Mo! Your 'Spring Swing' is a bling thing winning the brass ring! Congrats to you...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/21/2020 8:41:00 AM

Thank you John! An unexpected delight! :) xomo

Ann Gilmour

Date: 5/20/2020 10:55:00 PM

What a joyous image your words depict mmmmm lovely ~ thank you... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/21/2020 8:42:00 AM

Thank you Lovely! That's exactly what I was feeling ;), xomo

John Watt

Date: 5/19/2020 11:53:00 AM

Ah, spring is sprung and swing is swung. Delightful imagery of a lovely day. ~ John

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/19/2020 1:00:00 PM

Aw yeah! This was originally titled "spring swing" ;))) thank you John! xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/16/2020 11:39:00 AM

Sounds like a lovely spring afternoon :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/16/2020 11:55:00 AM

Twas! Swinging at last. Have a lovely Saturday my friend, xomo!

John Lawless

Date: 5/16/2020 7:29:00 AM

This just gave me a long exhaling ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Now sip some coffee and wriggle those toes

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/16/2020 8:58:00 AM

Awesomeness :))) That was what I did exactly. Dare I say the parka can now be put away... xomo!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/16/2020 6:57:00 AM

I am so happy you wrote this - maybe close to the same day I wrote a poem about May. I am excited about this warm weather. High of 76 today! Hooray!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/16/2020 9:01:00 AM

I was about to say it's grey here today, but a swath of blue is just opening up. Bring it on! xomo :)))

Jan Allison

Date: 5/16/2020 2:58:00 AM

love it Mo!:-) I love the middle line especially it made me smile, in fact the whole image has me beaming:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/16/2020 4:53:00 AM

Thank you Jan! Honing my haiku. Instead of trying too hard, I am realizing that the simple things in life are haiku. Every time a big cloud came I had to put my socks back on ;), hugs! xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2020 9:41:00 PM

I can't believe it, the last five poems I have seen here at Soup are some of the best I have read all day (I was here earlier) This is also in my group of what I consider great poetry.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/15/2020 9:56:00 PM

Wow! Thank you Andrea! I had forgotten I had written this one, the reply to a comment I made on someone else's foot poem reminded me, I figured what the hell... Again, wow & thank you! xomo <3