Maubessi

High in the mountains of Timor
On a hill in a cradling valley
Swathed with cloud 
Warmed by sunlight.

The Portuguese loved this place.
They built a pousada 
On the hill 
and planted roses.

It has stood for a hundred years.
They are rebuilding it. 
Visitors come
Absorb the peace.

Wander through the garden
Look under shrubs and flowers
Find a stone
Amongst the flowers.

Set near a rusty swing. 
Itself once used, now not. 
Mind the rust. 
All must decay.

Under frangipani
Is a memorial. 
Read what it says.
Robin Finlay Taudevin 14/3/1977 to 14/6/2006. 

My son.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/3/2016 8:34:00 AM
Oh what pain. Sorry for your loss. Well written
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Date: 4/2/2016 7:26:00 PM
oh this is beautiful but the ending so sad Lansell - may he rest in peace:-) hugs jan xx
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Lansell Taudevin
Date: 4/3/2016 8:40:00 AM
Thanks for that
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