Maternal Instincts

With magnetic fascination
akin to domestication
I connect with Ms. Rabbit’s dawn.
Four babies she’s laid in my lawn.

Provoked by supernal emotion
stirred by a sense of procreation
I cancel lawn fertilizer.
Grass cutter? I will advise her.

Unparalleled admiration
drives my kids to affirmation.
They promise to protect new pets
no bikes, baseballs or bayonets.

Deeply compelled, preservation
builds a hutch in exaltation.
Field glasses from my window pane
track nature’s risks: sun, wind and rain.

July 6, 2019

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for contest FINETUNE THIS, A COLLABORATION sponsored by Line Gauthier

AFFINITY WITH NATURE
by Line Gauthier

Magnetic fascination
Kin to emancipation
A connection internal
Stirs emotions supernal
Nature is unparalleled  
Provokes intoxication
As we feel deeply compelled
To exalt admiration
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Delaney Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 8:04 AM
Sweet poem. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, SuZ
Poteet Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 8:35 AM
thanks, Suzanne, I welcome your comment.
Gauthier Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 5:54 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. Very original with the rabbit. Congrats.
Poteet Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 8:38 AM
My return thanks to you, Line. A most unusual kind of collaboration contest. My account is based on experience which can be a good thing (for the rabbits). Appreciate the placement.
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