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Written: October 19, 2023, For Tania Kitchen Spooky Halloween Contest ___________________________________ Hope is buried, gulping Satan of the Night. Its odd, dreadful beats drove in schizo sight. Sweet dread awaits the fair-headed, awful stride. As fear drew closer, it heard the sad words abide.   They were expressionless, their bodies obeying. Love, it's ignored—bleeding hearts break, swaying. They recall dread and can tell a horrific story well. A red-hot sword could lure Satan from his shell. Haunting, poltergeists, and zombies are the core At Halloween, they shine as murderers may abhor. Undermining existence in horror's catacombs Blood and mayhem are the spooky twin gnomes. Become a demon, and I'll stay at Dracula castle. Awaken afraid from a lucid state, scared of hassle. Amidst a Halloween party, I was stuck in despair. Fear remains upon me after a spooky nightmare.

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Date: 11/2/2023 4:20:00 PM
Lasaad, a great spooky poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 10/20/2023 9:11:00 PM
Your spooky nightmare makes hair stand on end. Your description and choice of words are wonderful as ever. This rightly suits the season of Halloween ! Great entry... all the Best dear friend.
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Date: 10/20/2023 2:27:00 PM
I was covered with goosebumps as I read your poem. SCARY! The way you play with words and imagery is both unique and artistic. I appreciate your vocabulary and poetic voice/style. Glad all this was a nightmare and you weren't stuck in despair. Outstanding and masterful, dear Sotto. Enjoy your weekend, Sara
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Date: 10/20/2023 1:51:00 PM
This is beyond scary, quite the nightmare for sure! You have such a magnificent pen which can bring beauty and peace, or, if you so choose, goosebumps!
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Date: 10/20/2023 8:29:00 AM
Oh my, this is really a haunting and eerie write with a gothic ambience, impeccably fitting for this season.. Your wordplay is really enriched with poetic skills and I definitely love all those brilliantly flowing rhymes here! That opening line itself created a spooky ambience for the reader, very heartfelt too.. "Love, it's ignored—bleeding hearts break, swaying. They recall dread and can tell a horrific story well. A red-hot sword could lure Satan from his shell" I love this part so much, wow
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Date: 10/20/2023 7:38:00 AM
You celebrate Halloween in great style. Quite a frightening write. Blessings.
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Date: 10/20/2023 7:16:00 AM
Spooky and dark--aptly crafted to celebrate the season, my friend. Splendid images say aloud-- it is Halloween!
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Date: 10/20/2023 1:32:00 AM
How sublime and brilliant are your rhymes sotto, very well crafted and flows seamlessly too, i especially loved the lines “ A red-hot sword could lure Satan from his shell.” very creative and soul hitting! Powerful lines throughout that depicts the mayhem in such a poetic manner in such eloquence! Fits the mood right now, halloween vibes emanate so strongly through your word weaving! It is always a pleasure reading your very well written poems, and this is no exception! Sending you light always
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Date: 10/19/2023 6:41:00 PM
Fun fact about me, I've never done Halloween like at all. Okay I've done the barn party at church I mean attended whoever hosted it, and I ENJOY that much.
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Date: 10/19/2023 5:42:00 PM
Well this certainly is spooky! Great job! I would not want a nightmare like this! But the photo Soto is beautiful!Good luck in the contest!
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