Joyce Johnson Poet Haiku

Master's Art

birds rising on the breeze
hue of blue in mountain lake
borrowed from the sky

time tables ignored
mountains rise at their own pace
only God observes

tranquil and serene
undisturbed by man’s progress
nature’s oasis

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 21, 2012 at 7:53 AM Beautiful image you created, Joyce. Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick July 20, 2012 at 2:48 PM Feelings of peace and relaxation..Enjoyed ...((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 19, 2012 at 12:30 PM congrats Joyce on a lovely scene painted with words to honor u with a well deserved win luv.. always awesome to read ..

Kim Merryman July 18, 2012 at 6:34 PM I love this, Joyce. I really like the part about the mountain lake borrowing blue from the sky. Very creative. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Deborah Burch July 18, 2012 at 2:36 PM Brava, Joyce!! Big Congrats on your win!! so lovely...I like your personification of the mountains...ignoring time and doing their own thing...unnoticed by the world...but always noticed by God!! :)how wonderfully caring... love ya, deb

David Williams July 18, 2012 at 10:54 AM Joyce congrats on your win, love the idea of the lake borrowing the blue, very clever..David

Carol Sunshine Brown July 18, 2012 at 9:27 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick July 5, 2012 at 4:54 PM I want to go there...this is beautiful. BG

Kash Poet July 5, 2012 at 2:47 PM Very nice haiku series by you Joyce.Best wishes to you.