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birds rising on the breeze hue of blue in mountain lake borrowed from the sky time tables ignored mountains rise at their own pace only God observes tranquil and serene undisturbed by man’s progress nature’s oasis

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 7/21/2012 7:53:00 AM
Beautiful image you created, Joyce. Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/20/2012 2:48:00 PM
Feelings of peace and relaxation..Enjoyed ...((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 7/19/2012 12:30:00 PM
congrats Joyce on a lovely scene painted with words to honor u with a well deserved win luv.. always awesome to read ..
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:34:00 PM
I love this, Joyce. I really like the part about the mountain lake borrowing blue from the sky. Very creative. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/18/2012 2:36:00 PM
Brava, Joyce!! Big Congrats on your win!! so lovely...I like your personification of the mountains...ignoring time and doing their own thing...unnoticed by the world...but always noticed by God!! :)how wonderfully caring... love ya, deb
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Date: 7/18/2012 10:54:00 AM
Joyce congrats on your win, love the idea of the lake borrowing the blue, very clever..David
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Date: 7/18/2012 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2012 4:54:00 PM
I want to go there...this is beautiful. BG
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Date: 7/5/2012 2:47:00 PM
Very nice haiku series by you Joyce.Best wishes to you.
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