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Master of Deception

Dangerous water,
A master of deception;
For I am...black ice.

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James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 12:33:00 PM

So many crashes in Scotland in the winter down to Black Ice>>James

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/23/2009 8:29:00 PM

BRILLIANT haiku.

Kevin Carter

Date: 3/29/2009 8:31:00 PM

Master of deception oh how it gets me most of the time, why ...? cause of the he say she say you know what i mean? I just wrote another poem check it out. Abe i made you one of my favorites because your poetry touch my very soul maybe we can talk over the phone sometime how's that sound? AND THANKS

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/21/2009 2:44:00 PM

Hi Abe, very good description of a treacherous road topping! I had one bad encounter on black ice in NJ. Seven cars smashed together at a red light. Well done in Haiku form! Thanks for sharing your thoughts on "Hungry and Homeless Americans." Obviously, today's economy is taking its toll on rich and poor alike. Love, Carolyn

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/19/2009 4:28:00 PM

Excellent Haiku, Abe. Your imagery is right on. Well done! Love, Robn

Daniel Neal

Date: 2/14/2009 7:30:00 PM

I didn't see this one, you done a great job. DN

Chris Goombi

Date: 2/14/2009 7:25:00 PM

Dangerous it is, nice thoughts.

Danielle Moreno

Date: 2/14/2009 7:21:00 PM

Thanks for you comments...Danielle