Masseuse-- For Deb

hotsy totsy cutesy
does the watutsy
on your backbone
touchy feely girlie
serenades senses early
with design of her own
deep tissue
is the issue
fingers probe and prod
kneading, rubbing
muscles in a wad
heavenly bliss
mind seems to kiss
edges of the mirage
now fully awake
no mistake
afterglow of
a massage.

©  09 Dec 2010  Charles Henderson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/16/2011 11:24:00 AM
From someone who also has had their muscles in a wad and found an empty spot on Deb's schedule, this is masterpiece description of her talent. (3 mi down the road in the Burg). Great poetry, doc.
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Date: 12/12/2010 10:49:00 AM
Charlie see if you think I should remove the last verse in Love Beyond the Pale..L & L
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Date: 12/9/2010 10:32:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhh my I loves!!! IT! Now Carolyn ..thanks for letting him call me a hotsy totsey cutey!!! LOL
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Date: 12/9/2010 10:06:00 AM
Did you write this for Deb Guzzi, Charles? She sure does have her own unique style! Very cool poem. Deb is sure to love this one. Love, Carolyn
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