Masks

Heaven's storms of fury see behind bland masks of deceit.

heavenstormmonoku

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Line Gauthier

March 20, 2021 at 5:48 AM

powerful ~

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 8, 2020 at 8:25 AM

Hello Sam Kauffman,Yes I agree. Enjoy your day my friend.

Michelle Faulkner

May 7, 2020 at 5:29 PM

Wow, the fury of heaven, that is a line to remember!

Sandra Adams

May 6, 2020 at 8:35 PM

so very true, one cannot pull the wool over the Lord's eyes... he can see behind the mask of deceit … simple yet powerful Sam... hugs

Sam Kauffman

May 6, 2020 at 11:30 PM

Thank you Sandra! It seems no matter how hard we try to lock away our "skeletons," God knows about them - and still loves us. Pretty amazing! blessings and hugs.

Timothy Hicks

May 6, 2020 at 7:35 PM

Your title conjured something longer in my mind ... nonetheless, it said what it wanted to say. Makes me think of nature as the great equalizer ... no room for emotions and social justice games of pretend. The storm will leave you flat on your back, regardless. Great monoku (and thanks for your recent stop on my page!)

Sam Kauffman

May 6, 2020 at 8:06 PM

Hi Timothy, thank you for our visit. I think, some day, this will be the foundation for a longer poem - thank you for your insight, compliment and encouragement of my muse to get off her.....All the best to you!

Tom Cunningham

May 6, 2020 at 2:57 PM

Reminds me of that saying, you can run but you cant hide. Wise words Sam Over Fork Over. Tom

Sam Kauffman

May 6, 2020 at 3:30 PM

Thank you Tom. I also thought of the words from The Shadow about seeing into the hearts of men(mankind). Also thought about how blessed we are with God's grace. Be blessed my friend. Over Fork Over.

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