Masks (Of Hallowen)

Darkness uttermost
Howl gobblins, gooks, grinch and ghost
Dripping touch of night

Blood like curdled light
Candle tears, white serpents hiss
Shadowing the mist

Hell has broken free
Behind the masked jubilee
Of death's silent screams

Rats, pumpkins, dead dreams
In dried fairytales of leaves
Mark, our prank deceives

The shuddering knife
Not again, jack ripped his heart
With pale piper's fife.

Not heaven nor art
The cold merriment, a wheeze
Of dark wintry breeze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/13/2015 7:15:00 PM
i like the dark imagery here.... SKAT
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Date: 11/17/2010 6:45:00 PM
these scarey writes employ a touch of genius, here my friend! Great job
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Date: 11/17/2010 3:25:00 PM
Wow, David! You're way over my head. on the Three MUsicians. Your poem is also over my head in places, but what I can figure out is super. We need a little music to these Haiku - Maybe the Witches Sabbath from Berlioz's Fantastic Symmphony. Regards, Dave
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Date: 11/17/2010 1:40:00 PM
Good work that is very descriptive of Halloween..Good luck if entered in a contest...Sara
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Date: 11/17/2010 1:25:00 PM
Last but one triplet is a masterstroke elluding to Jack the ripper and piper the pied piper of Hamlin, david
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:18:00 AM
Dark images that are so appropriate for Halloween, David. Many great lines; I especially liked "jack ripped his heart." Nic play on words that recalls Jack the Ripper's killing spree. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/17/2010 9:49:00 AM
"Not heaven nor art"..How right you are, David. Perfect imagery, always.. goes to my favs. Love, Audrey
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