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Mascara Rain

dark rain falling down....
liquid smog drops drizzling down
so deep I may drown

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Sara Kendrick

February 6, 2011 at 2:05 PM

Congratulations on your win...Sara

Robert Pettit

February 4, 2011 at 11:07 PM

A rain like mascara? Now that really is a dark rain! Congratulations on your win with this fine haiku.

Kory Calhoun

January 24, 2011 at 6:23 AM

Hi Robb - Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

The Situation

January 18, 2011 at 7:45 PM

congradulations on your win. T. S.

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2011 at 7:32 PM

AWesome, Robb, deserves a 7 rating. Congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 17, 2011 at 2:27 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Robb

James Fraser

January 17, 2011 at 1:20 PM

The title sure lures the reader Robb, and the poetry does not disappoint. Many congratulations on your win in Skat's contest....:)

Audrey Haick

January 17, 2011 at 11:18 AM

I'm smiling at yout title. Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest. Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 17, 2011 at 6:01 AM

Congrats Robb on your wonderful win in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry luv.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 5:47 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Robb, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

January 17, 2011 at 4:51 AM

Robb, I just love your title ties in beautifully with the images your words bring forth.. congratulations on your success in Irma's contest :)

Skat A

January 16, 2011 at 9:35 PM

Congratulations, Robb A.K. !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Nette Onclaud

January 15, 2011 at 1:42 AM

oooh...an enormous trip through a living, breathing possible nightmare, robb... fascinating piece that would do well in the contest..:) nette

Hathor Ammutlinra

January 14, 2011 at 9:51 PM

Brilliant Robb A. Kopp, the title reminds me of all the tears I have shared with my blanket' (lin~ra)

Andrea Dietrich

January 14, 2011 at 9:05 PM

I really love the quality of your sounds in this one, Robb. And the message of it too. LUv, Andrea

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