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Mascara Rain

dark rain falling down.... liquid smog drops drizzling down so deep I may drown

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/6/2011 2:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:07:00 PM
A rain like mascara? Now that really is a dark rain! Congratulations on your win with this fine haiku.
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Date: 1/24/2011 6:23:00 AM
Hi Robb - Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:45:00 PM
congradulations on your win. T. S.
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:32:00 PM
AWesome, Robb, deserves a 7 rating. Congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Robb
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Date: 1/17/2011 1:20:00 PM
The title sure lures the reader Robb, and the poetry does not disappoint. Many congratulations on your win in Skat's contest....:)
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:18:00 AM
I'm smiling at yout title. Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/17/2011 6:01:00 AM
Congrats Robb on your wonderful win in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry luv.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Robb, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:51:00 AM
Robb, I just love your title ties in beautifully with the images your words bring forth.. congratulations on your success in Irma's contest :)
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:35:00 PM
Congratulations, Robb A.K. !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT
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Date: 1/15/2011 1:42:00 AM
oooh...an enormous trip through a living, breathing possible nightmare, robb... fascinating piece that would do well in the contest..:) nette
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:51:00 PM
Brilliant Robb A. Kopp, the title reminds me of all the tears I have shared with my blanket' (lin~ra)
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:05:00 PM
I really love the quality of your sounds in this one, Robb. And the message of it too. LUv, Andrea
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