Mary Swingler Poet Quatrain

Marylou

How can I describe me to you? 
What can I say about Marylou? 
Spiritual, describes the woman I wish to be. 
Have I accomplished this successfully? 

Sentimental as a child---- 
Throughout the years, mushy, slushy feelings are compiled. 
Big tears gush from my eyes. 
Tender stories result in blubbering cries. 

Friends tell me I'm very shy. 
I agree, this trait I won't deny. 
This poem gives you a glimpse into my heart. 
I am a work in progress, not yet Jehovah's work of art.



(This is a swap quatrain.)

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Skat A November 26, 2015 at 1:30 PM Mary,thank you for sharing. Have a great day. Happy Thanksgiving ... Skat Mary Swingler November 26, 2015 at 1:45 PM Thank you for your thoughtfulness. I hope you were able to get some rest. I also hope your sister is progressively getting better.

Richard Lamoureux November 26, 2015 at 8:30 AM You underestimate His artistic ability. Perhaps if you look a bit closer you will see what Jehovah sees. Mary Swingler November 26, 2015 at 9:12 AM I pray that never happens. I am not the finished work, but in the future I will be. Jehovah is the examiner of hearts, (Pr.17:3) I trust in him completely> I know he will refine me in harmony with his will.