Mary Todd's Bar

under the bay bridge in astoria there is a 
brick building with a gnarled up old wooden door. 

something along the line of mary todds is written
 on it.

 In the doors Center is a strange looking compass 
  that welcomes in a little of the fog along 
   with the occasional thirsty kingfisher.

 whose kingdom is a bundle of yellow and 
white nets
 tossed in the bed of a blue 84 ford pickup 
parked 
  around the back.  

here the locals always park in the back 
and fill up 
on busch beer in the can. 

inside stacks of cardboard boxes full of 
empty cans line the hallway
 leading to the bathroom.

 the bar is an old solid piece of maple with 
countless carvings on it,
 from what looks like pocket knives or 
fishhooks.

 scribbeled and carved names like john 
and neil are everywhere,
 but the wood looks old enough to have 
jonah and noah on it. 

now the whole place smells of salt and 
whiskey, 
the kind of salt thats in the air and settles 
in your
 mouth under your toungue.

 nobody know's better than mary herself, 
they say one day 
leaning over the bar she looked over her 
shoulder at the
sunlight coming through the window and 
turned into
  a pillar of salt.

  of course that was years ago in the old 
testament and you 
  know how fishermen tale tall tales, 
especially at mary todd's.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 3, 2011 at 10:38 AM
I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Nathan. Love, Carol
hmm...I really liked this. It's different in a wonderful way. I loved the way you described the bar. I love a poem that's very visual to where the reader feels like they are actually there. Enjoyed reading this poem this morning!
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