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Mary and the Cloud

It had been a sunny day,
but Mary wouldn't come out to play.
She was covered by a cloud
that wouldn't rain.
Was she in some kind of pain?
She could not explain,
and her head was bowed.

Outside, every little sprout,
soon withered in a drought, 
and every bird
refused to sing, 
or even to take wing. 
There was no rain that Spring.
Not a sound was heard...

till Mary chased the the cloud outside
and pinched it until it cried
out so awfully loud -
with rain, 
but while I can't explain,
the world is now glad again - 
to see Mary and the cloud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Godwin Avatar
January 17, 2026 at 7:18 AM
David, this is you when a serious pen is in your hand, humor discarded and talent imparted poetry is inked so grand. Better and better and better, so much so that there's no telling where your ceiling, if any, may be. Gorgeous. I made POTD today, I never know why, and that's how I was blessed to find this.
Crandall Avatar
January 17, 2026 at 9:20 AM
Hi CayCay, thanks for your kind words! Yup, sometimes, I take a break from joking around - :-))
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 12:03 PM
Unique! Congrats on POTD!
Crandall Avatar
January 15, 2026 at 8:20 PM
Thanks, Kim!
Delegans Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 9:36 PM
Congrats on POTD, David!
Crandall Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 4:21 PM
Thanks, Christopher!
Wolf Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 6:29 PM
Hey, I missed this one, David. Congratulations on `POTD. ~ Gershon
Crandall Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 4:20 PM
Thanks, Gershon!
Nicole Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 6:09 PM
So clever and cute. It never crossed my mind to pinch a cloud to create rain. : ) I learn something new every day. Congratulations David, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Crandall Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 4:16 PM
Thanks, Brandy! Hmm, you might get some funny ideas, learning from my poems - lol. Have a great day :-)
Alhemaidy Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations on your interesting POTD. Enjoyed read! Have a wonderful day ~ AA
Crandall Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 4:13 PM
Thanks Abdullah - have a great day!
La France Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 8:23 AM
David, a wonderful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
Crandall Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 4:12 PM
Thanks, Constance!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your "Mary and the Cloud" write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Crandall Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 4:12 PM
Thanks, Paula!
Seeker Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 7:39 AM
An intriguing write. How difficult it is to peep in another’s heart and mind. Congratulations on POTD, David.
Crandall Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 2:23 PM
True! Thanks, Unseeking Seeker!
Lawless Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 6:53 AM
Interesting write David, I see a few metaphor nuances herein...but that's just my cloudy interpretation...
Crandall Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 2:23 PM
Thanks, John - after I wrote it, I was thinking the same thing!
Gifford Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 5:30 AM
Hello David, congratulations on your poem being featured as POTD. Beautifully written and a great piece. Have a wonderful day.
Crandall Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 2:22 PM
Thanks, have a great day Zyrool!
Rodgers Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 4:10 AM
Hello David, Congrats on POTD! Your poem got me thinking about how we often treat "the cloud" depression or a heavy mood as something that just happens to us. I loved the moment Mary stops waiting for it to pass and actually puts her hands on it. It makes me wonder if our internal droughts only break when we stop bowing our heads and start engaging with the gloom directly. Winter Blessings, David, Daniel.
Crandall Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 2:21 PM
Hi Daniel! Thanks! Maybe - it worked for Mary!
Kitchin Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 3:42 AM
David, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD.
Crandall Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 2:09 PM
Thanks, Tania!
Jones Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 12:51 AM
Very cute creative writing David! Congratulations on potd!
Crandall Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 2:08 PM
Thanks, Karen!
Cunningham Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 12:32 AM
We all need to chase those clouds away sometimes ,congratulations to you David on today's POTD honour. Tom
Crandall Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 2:08 PM
Exactly - thanks, Tom!
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