Marvelous, Mesmerizing, Montserrat

To glance at the jagged hill is a dream
Just as I yearn to amble over its magma flow 
Like a million salmon swimming up my bloodstream
I will see the Soufriere Hills, I just know
As the earth vented its seismic frustrations
many fled its tectonic conniption
That migration woke me from deep sedation
And my restless soul underwent a great decryption

There's a certain lure to a place with an "exclusion zone"
That makes me abjure my embrace of an old touchstone 
There's a beguiling seduction to unremitting eruption
A smiling effluxion causing me to submit to its disruption

I've been a wayward wanderer 
And a sojourner on a quest
I've been a perennial ponderer
And interminably, a seeker suppressed
But the moment I saw Montserrat
even only in a photographic image
I knew this was the place I had sought 
to make my greatest pilgrimage

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Date: 11/23/2016 5:42:00 PM
Some way, some how I know you'll make it there Godspeed my closest friend And my most distant pal
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Trey Hamner
Date: 11/24/2016 12:52:00 AM
Thank you Ryan
Date: 11/15/2016 2:42:00 PM
trey, better late than never.. warm congrats..huggs
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Trey Hamner
Date: 11/15/2016 3:42:00 PM
Thank you very much, Nette.
Date: 11/11/2016 8:03:00 PM
Our cruise ship brought us near Montserrat. It was something to see the island covered in ash. Congrats on your win, Trey!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2016 3:03:00 PM
:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2016 3:03:00 PM
:)
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Trey Hamner
Date: 11/12/2016 12:06:00 AM
Wow, I'm jealous! Thank you.
Date: 11/11/2016 6:43:00 PM
Hi Trey, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Trey Hamner
Date: 11/12/2016 12:05:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 11/11/2016 3:50:00 PM
Well done on the placement Trey'
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Trey Hamner
Date: 11/12/2016 12:05:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 11/11/2016 6:54:00 AM
Awesome piece!! Congrats Trey, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Trey Hamner
Date: 11/12/2016 12:04:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 11/10/2016 11:58:00 AM
wow!!! lovely poem on this mesmerizing place! enjoyed your imagery and word flow dear Trey, Congratulations on your great win!//love, Anu:)
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Trey Hamner
Date: 11/10/2016 6:04:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 11/10/2016 11:32:00 AM
Great imagery! Congrats!
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Trey Hamner
Date: 11/10/2016 6:05:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 11/10/2016 11:21:00 AM
Very well written description of an interesting place to visit. I like the form too. Congratulations and thanks for being in the contest.
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Trey Hamner
Date: 11/10/2016 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Janis, I enjoyed writing for this contest and would not have thought of this subject without your impetus.
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