Marvelous, Mesmerizing, Montserrat

To glance at the jagged hill is a dream
Just as I yearn to amble over its magma flow 
Like a million salmon swimming up my bloodstream
I will see the Soufriere Hills, I just know
As the earth vented its seismic frustrations
many fled its tectonic conniption
That migration woke me from deep sedation
And my restless soul underwent a great decryption

There's a certain lure to a place with an "exclusion zone"
That makes me abjure my embrace of an old touchstone 
There's a beguiling seduction to unremitting eruption
A smiling effluxion causing me to submit to its disruption

I've been a wayward wanderer 
And a sojourner on a quest
I've been a perennial ponderer
And interminably, a seeker suppressed
But the moment I saw Montserrat
even only in a photographic image
I knew this was the place I had sought 
to make my greatest pilgrimage
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Westermann Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 5:42 PM
Some way, some how I know you'll make it there Godspeed my closest friend And my most distant pal
Hamner Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 12:52 AM
Thank you Ryan
Onclaud Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 2:42 PM
trey, better late than never.. warm congrats..huggs
Hamner Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 3:42 PM
Thank you very much, Nette.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Our cruise ship brought us near Montserrat. It was something to see the island covered in ash. Congrats on your win, Trey!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 3:03 PM
:)
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November 16, 2016 at 3:03 PM
:)
Hamner Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:06 AM
Wow, I'm jealous! Thank you.
Y. Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Hi Trey, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
Hamner Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:05 AM
Thank you.
Maverick Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Well done on the placement Trey'
Hamner Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:05 AM
Thank you.
Kimathi Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Awesome piece!! Congrats Trey, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Hamner Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:04 AM
Thank you.
Nayak Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 11:58 AM
wow!!! lovely poem on this mesmerizing place! enjoyed your imagery and word flow dear Trey, Congratulations on your great win!//love, Anu:)
Hamner Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Thank you very much!
Martin Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Great imagery! Congrats!
Hamner Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 6:05 PM
Thank you.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 11:21 AM
Very well written description of an interesting place to visit. I like the form too. Congratulations and thanks for being in the contest.
Hamner Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 6:06 PM
Thank you, Janis, I enjoyed writing for this contest and would not have thought of this subject without your impetus.
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