Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Limerick

Marvelous Medicos!

The psychiatrist meddles with the head.

Nutritionists keep us decently fed.

Nurses are very clever,

As are surgeons, however,

The proctologist's probe is met with dread!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 5 in Carolyn Devonshire's "Doctor Phobia!" Contest - August 2010

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Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2010 at 7:35 PM Congratulations on a limerick well executed! Luv, Andrea

Sharon Tideswell August 21, 2010 at 10:51 AM Haha, very funny and very clever too. Enjoyed the read, congrats on your win ~ Sharon :)

Mitch White August 21, 2010 at 3:44 AM Congrats on the winnnnnnnnnnnnnn!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 20, 2010 at 9:23 PM Congrats on the win, Robert

John Freeman August 20, 2010 at 4:09 PM Congratulations Bob on your fifth place, Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse August 20, 2010 at 2:20 PM congrats on the well deserved win!! Take care!

Francine Roberts August 20, 2010 at 12:39 PM love it, congrats on your win

Ralph Taylor August 20, 2010 at 11:15 AM Congrats, Sarge. Great write, my friend. Nice going. You guys have a great weekend. Una/Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown August 20, 2010 at 9:14 AM Congratulations on your win Robert in Carolyn Devonshire's "Doctor Phobia! Quick Contest". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 20, 2010 at 9:09 AM Congrats Bob on your win in the doctor contest with this great write..ciao with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire August 20, 2010 at 8:57 AM Can't imagine what that proctology probe is like, Bob! Funny poem! Many of the Soup's best humor writers provided a lot of laughs. There were many great entries and it was hard ranking them as each one gave me a laugh. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse August 19, 2010 at 6:42 PM enjoyed reading today!

Marycile Beer August 19, 2010 at 5:01 PM Bob, This poem could be catorgrized as a Psychiatrist poem. This is really cute. I am on my new computer. I'd cross my fingers but it is hard to type that way and my fingers don't need any complications. Hope you score on this one. God Bless, Cile

Skat A August 19, 2010 at 4:48 PM A WoNDERFUL PoEM 2 READ, tAKE CARE & ENJOY YoUR SELF*luv~SKAT

John Freeman August 19, 2010 at 11:05 AM Talk about Phobia!Haaaaaa! Good luck in the contest. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick August 19, 2010 at 9:18 AM Piquant write for the great contest..Have a feeling that it is winners' circle for sure..Good luck with this fine work...Sara

Carrie Richards August 19, 2010 at 8:52 AM There are some places, that should never be invaded!!! Lol!!

Mitch White August 19, 2010 at 6:01 AM Good un. Kinda similar to mine, but in reverse!

Wilma Neels August 19, 2010 at 2:44 AM Enjoyed this loads Bob.. All the best for the contest, love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A August 18, 2010 at 10:14 PM Smiles Bob H. i trully enjoyed, the best luck in the contest,..p..d

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 18, 2010 at 7:35 PM Pretty good one Bob as always.. good luck if for a contest on Soup... some neat things to think about too..luv.. enjoyed.. with luv from Italy..ciao..

Carolyn Devonshire August 18, 2010 at 6:28 PM :) I didn't see it in the entries yet, but thanks for supporting my contest, Bob!! Love, Carolyn