Marvel of a Skyscape

Imbuing the hour with piquant fog 
an intricate yet final sway of this arc rises:
How autumn’s skyline  reels  into  weaves
as stars orbit in a basin of clouds naked   
within a dome’s mantle  glimmering  glimmering:
My breath hushes while more dappled

leaves whirl through the blaze of maples, oaks,
that I  in this panorama staged
for this exact moment  remains a while;
if only to embrace this guileless pageant
which will never return the same way, like now.


For Anthony Slausen's Sky Contest
and Brian's Select H Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Norton Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 10:43 PM
Hmm. Very appealing. You have a gift for words that makes me exclaim--more, more, more, please! Congrats on your placing! Best wishes, Bryan Norton
Fleming Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 3:09 AM
This is truly marvelous...it has an almost undefinable quality about it all. Loved it, Nette! My very warmest regards as always. :) john
Gentry Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 12:50 PM
Congratulations on your win! Great imagery!
Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 9:30 PM
Lovely, nette. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Barden Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 5:24 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win, Nette ... well-done!
Turner Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 6:00 PM
No two are ever the same, Nette, I always enjoy reading your beautiful poetry:)
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 2:58 PM
- Beautifully done, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 9:53 AM
You poetry is always full of imagery and this one is excellent...
Warrior Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Breathtaking! my skyful friend...lovely and elegant as ever nette...love and light...^WW^
Sands Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:24 AM
Beautiful Nette ! Good luck in the contest :)
Pandit Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 6:48 AM
A wonderful depiction of the sky with all its glory..excellent poem as always..best for a BIG win, nette.
Cunningham Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 6:46 AM
A lovely verse about one of natures great wonders Nette. Well written. Good luck in the contest. Tom.
Michael Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 6:03 AM
It would be nice if we could package the now and use later...Nice how you placed yourself as the observer...All the best nette
Talbot Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 5:10 AM
The marvel of a skyscape, a gift from nature to all poets, and nette you've unwrapped yours with such feeling, a winner for me, faved. Mick
Marty Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 4:54 AM
Sky sighting is a regular fancy for me , that I can see myself in this impeccably designed poem. Hats off!
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