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Marvel of a Skyscape

Imbuing the hour with piquant fog an intricate yet final sway of this arc rises: How autumn’s skyline reels into weaves as stars orbit in a basin of clouds naked within a dome’s mantle glimmering glimmering: My breath hushes while more dappled leaves whirl through the blaze of maples, oaks, that I in this panorama staged for this exact moment remains a while; if only to embrace this guileless pageant which will never return the same way, like now. For Anthony Slausen's Sky Contest and Brian's Select H Contest

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Date: 6/15/2020 10:43:00 PM
Hmm. Very appealing. You have a gift for words that makes me exclaim--more, more, more, please! Congrats on your placing! Best wishes, Bryan Norton
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Date: 6/25/2018 3:09:00 AM
This is truly marvelous...it has an almost undefinable quality about it all. Loved it, Nette! My very warmest regards as always. :) john
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Date: 6/14/2018 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Great imagery!
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Date: 6/9/2018 9:30:00 PM
Lovely, nette. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 6/9/2018 5:24:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win, Nette ... well-done!
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Date: 5/27/2018 6:00:00 PM
No two are ever the same, Nette, I always enjoy reading your beautiful poetry:)
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Date: 5/27/2018 2:58:00 PM
- Beautifully done, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2018 9:53:00 AM
You poetry is always full of imagery and this one is excellent...
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:33:00 AM
Breathtaking! my skyful friend...lovely and elegant as ever nette...love and light...^WW^
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:24:00 AM
Beautiful Nette ! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 5/27/2018 6:48:00 AM
A wonderful depiction of the sky with all its glory..excellent poem as always..best for a BIG win, nette.
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Date: 5/27/2018 6:46:00 AM
A lovely verse about one of natures great wonders Nette. Well written. Good luck in the contest. Tom.
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Date: 5/27/2018 6:03:00 AM
It would be nice if we could package the now and use later...Nice how you placed yourself as the observer...All the best nette
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Date: 5/27/2018 5:10:00 AM
The marvel of a skyscape, a gift from nature to all poets, and nette you've unwrapped yours with such feeling, a winner for me, faved. Mick
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Date: 5/27/2018 4:54:00 AM
Sky sighting is a regular fancy for me , that I can see myself in this impeccably designed poem. Hats off!
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