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Martian Olympiad Imagine if our Olympic stars, took spacecraft to host Planet Mars. Defying gravity’s no longer in. Athletes float in an atmosphere thin. Space vehicles race the rocky craters. Our hosts have skin like alligators. We skate the polar ice crags. Compete for gold in laser tag. Most the events will take place indoors galactica games and star wars. Gymnasts will fly off the walls suspended in space, never to fall. Team sports are played on simulators, medals to lick planetary invaders. They’ll sleep by the Phobus and Deimos moons. These things may happen, very soon. 8/8/16

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Date: 3/24/2018 7:53:00 PM
Hi Sian, great piece, a fave for me, however us colonizing another world? If the late Steven Hawkins prediction is correct, then we have less than 600 years to work with, stay focused. Congratulations on your placement... Mick
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/24/2018 9:51:00 PM
Thanks Mick. I think we will be there in much less than 600 years. It only takes 6 months to reach. There is in all probability a journey in our lifetimes. Since we haven't touched down for a while it's time.
Date: 3/24/2018 7:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this creative fun poem. Great imagery. I could see this playing out.
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Date: 3/24/2018 9:51:00 PM
Thanks Susan. We will probably see this.
Date: 3/24/2018 5:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win on this wonderful verse.. Sian! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 3/24/2018 9:52:00 PM
Thanks Eve, Blessings Janis,
Date: 3/24/2018 3:30:00 PM
I can absolutely see this happening in the future. It is a quite satisfying read.
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Date: 3/24/2018 3:00:00 PM
Great scenario. Well done, Sian, and congrats.
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Date: 3/24/2018 9:52:00 PM
Thanks Line.
Date: 3/24/2018 9:34:00 AM
Great imagery in your poem on what may come to pass someday, Sian! Congratulations on your win for this great futuristic write! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/24/2018 9:53:00 PM
I saw a movie recently that makes this all seem very real. Thanks for the comments. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 8/20/2016 6:16:00 PM
Nice imagery. I enjoyed . May come true in far future
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/20/2016 9:09:00 PM
Thanks. I don't think I'LL see that one.
Date: 8/14/2016 12:29:00 PM
Great imaginative write Janis ... who knows what could happen in the future lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/14/2016 2:09:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. We never know......
Date: 8/8/2016 7:39:00 PM
Janis, I loved your sense of imaginative creativity you put into this piece! 7 ; )
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/8/2016 10:37:00 PM
Thanks, Connie.....also for the rating

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