Mars

Perhaps there’s life on Mars,
With boats, TV and bars:
A world the same as ours.

With the possibility of underground lakes, could there be life on the red planet, after all?

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Andrea Dietrich

October 28, 2013 at 3:58 PM

Jack, go ahead and put your newest one in my contest. I finally read my entries and you are right, the first one is just too much like the fairy tale, it's nice but much too ordinary. change it!! I liked your other one.

James Foulk

August 19, 2011 at 9:44 PM

i think that there could be. I find it hard to believe that God only put life just on Earth, think about it. this was a great write. thank you for commenting on Tina my little Terrier. I hope i can keep on posting, i am really having trouble with my internet Explorer, i post a comment then the internet goes out. that is one reason why i may not even have internet again, it seems i am always having trouble no matter who i have for internet.

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 16, 2011 at 7:56 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Triplet" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 15, 2011 at 11:19 PM

Congrats Jack on top ten victory with new form and great words luv.. bought my ticket ..haha..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 15, 2011 at 9:28 PM

Congratulations on the win in my contest, jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 15, 2011 at 3:41 PM

hey Jack perhaps their economy is a bit better too luv..haha.. good luck in the contest.. when do u plan on visiting .. I want to go..along..

Carolyn Devonshire

August 15, 2011 at 1:22 PM

Wouldn't it be interesting if there were creatures "with botas, TVs and bars" living in the underground lakes on Mars? I see this is a contest entry and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn