Mars

Perhaps there’s life on Mars,
With boats, TV and bars:
A world the same as ours.

With the possibility of underground lakes, could there be life on the red planet, after all?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2013 3:58:00 PM

Jack, go ahead and put your newest one in my contest. I finally read my entries and you are right, the first one is just too much like the fairy tale, it's nice but much too ordinary. change it!! I liked your other one.

James Foulk

Date: 8/19/2011 9:44:00 PM

i think that there could be. I find it hard to believe that God only put life just on Earth, think about it. this was a great write. thank you for commenting on Tina my little Terrier. I hope i can keep on posting, i am really having trouble with my internet Explorer, i post a comment then the internet goes out. that is one reason why i may not even have internet again, it seems i am always having trouble no matter who i have for internet.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2011 7:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Triplet" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2011 11:19:00 PM

Congrats Jack on top ten victory with new form and great words luv.. bought my ticket ..haha..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2011 9:28:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in my contest, jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2011 3:41:00 PM

hey Jack perhaps their economy is a bit better too luv..haha.. good luck in the contest.. when do u plan on visiting .. I want to go..along..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/15/2011 1:22:00 PM

Wouldn't it be interesting if there were creatures "with botas, TVs and bars" living in the underground lakes on Mars? I see this is a contest entry and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2011 10:06:00 PM

hmmm, maybe if they have an underground world??

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/14/2011 8:53:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, jack

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/14/2011 5:31:00 PM

Good one...dont think so though...lol.BG