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Marrying Rich

the veil falls and dire is the diamond heart the entire sapphire ocean hanging about her neck 2/14/2018

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Date: 2/15/2018 10:33:00 AM
That will in time see her hung! Your mind is unique in that it is unlike any mind I recall every knowing in my life. Your thoughts travel places my thoughts do not - but that's the beauty of it, individuality. You often show me dimensions of thought that are new to me and my brain. I thank you for all the above! All the best ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2018 2:51:00 PM
I thank you CayCay for a kind comment! Blessings, my sweet friend,
Date: 2/14/2018 9:08:00 PM
nice write Kim, diamonds forever :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2018 2:51:00 PM
Thank you, Lewis!
Date: 2/14/2018 4:48:00 PM
We can't all be marrying for love. Loved your poem. Beautiful and powerful imagery, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2018 7:42:00 PM
Thanks, Line! I loved reading your kimos so thought I’d write a couple! A little different then a haiku :)

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