Marriage

Is a sacred vow With sincerity n love Between two people Intertwining them As one entity, unit Through words written N said out loud As loved one’s n family gather Watching two lives Intertwine forever

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Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/22/2009 1:36:00 PM

Leah, you are absolutely right. What God has joined together let no man put asunder. Nice message to all. I love it. Ernilando

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/21/2009 8:15:00 PM

Leah, check out the Haiku and Senyru forms..you could write them easily..very nice work..BG

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/21/2009 11:07:00 AM

loved it

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/21/2009 10:43:00 AM

Wow... :) this is beautiful. As is the union of two hearts, two souls, two minds and bodies.... Truthfully, In all honesty, I have been married twice, never within the church, and NEVER have I experienced becoming as one. Sad but true, we live and learn, and may I say that something of this nature in this day and age is rare... but totally possible when we depend on our Jehovah~Jirah! :) with love, Lucinda