Marmalade Skies

~Marmalade skies~ one spoon at a time they feed the morning horizon Soft offerings of color picked ripe from the vine ~Cantaloupe dreams~ a small slice of moon the dawn’s crescent smiles on me with a Cheshire grin cocked slightly to the side ~Plum pudding blankets~ suspended above life, moving slowly but coming of the day as alarms break the solitude nestled in down feather pillows ~Raspberry whispers~ singing the scent of the fresh sunrise dew on wishes coated in sparkling splendor and footprints beyond the gate ~Nectarine blessings~ sweet on my lips beneath an orchard arbor I hold you close to my morning and taste the bounty of your love Good morning Soupers
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Smith Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 4:56 PM
Faving this little jewel, my friend.. Lobe love love imagery here... This is the poetry I long to write but the words never come..
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January 18, 2017 at 5:06 PM
Thank you Arlene. that is such a nice thing to say to me. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
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January 18, 2017 at 12:17 PM
Sweet sweet write, especially liked cantaloupe dreams, great way to start the day although I'm on a no sugar diet, you got me salivating.A7
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January 18, 2017 at 4:15 PM
Thanks so much John. Sorry about that. :)
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January 18, 2017 at 8:47 AM
I 'd like to peek inside your fridge, please lol...sweet stuff Chris...but I'm a diabetic lol...great verse :)...god bless...^WW^
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January 18, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Thank you so very much Winged Warrior...I used sugar free ink when I wrote this, does that help? :)
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January 17, 2017 at 8:59 PM
Oh my, you have the best good nights and good mornings ever. What a gem.
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January 18, 2017 at 8:12 AM
Thank you so much Andrea
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January 17, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Lovely, Chris! Images are beautiful and tasty too!
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January 18, 2017 at 8:12 AM
Thank you so much Kim
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January 17, 2017 at 3:19 PM
Beautiful imagery. A very enchanting poem, Chris.
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January 17, 2017 at 3:51 PM
Thank you so very much Christy.
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 2:33 PM
The delicate fruits of one luscious morning...superb images
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January 17, 2017 at 3:51 PM
Thank you Tim.
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January 17, 2017 at 1:16 PM
ohh, breathtaking vignettes of nature and love---enjoyed this thread ,chris..huggs
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January 17, 2017 at 1:51 PM
Thank you so very much Nette. I appreciate your kindness always my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
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January 17, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Wow Chris you served up a wonderful fruit salad, with fabulous metaphors. I will feast on this beauty for many mornings:-) hugs Jan xx
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January 17, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Thanks so very much Jan, I am so thrilled you enjoyed this. I appreciate you my friend.
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January 17, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Me like this poem a whole lot, Chris. Wonderful imagery and fruitful metaphors. A delectable combo. Very tasteful offering, my friend. A sweet, juicy and succulent gem of a poem. Love and peace to you.
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January 17, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Thanks so very much Freddie for your always kind thoughts. I am happy this one tempted your appetite.
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January 17, 2017 at 8:57 AM
Good morning Chris, I love fruit, I had expected a title like Tangerine Skies though ;) It's that first stanza, it's delicious really....
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January 17, 2017 at 9:11 AM
I thought I'd give you a break on the "tangerine" lines Darren. :) Thanks so much my friend.
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January 17, 2017 at 8:12 AM
Sweet to my ear these words...I love each stanza. The last one my favourite stanza. This morning I was thinking of wonderful skies and orchards too : ). Love the title , It makes it a delicious sky : )
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January 17, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend. Your words this morning definitely sweeten my day.
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January 17, 2017 at 7:18 AM
- .... my blood sugar rises to great heights, Chris :) - Lovely and sweet - Good morning :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 17, 2017 at 9:10 AM
I hope you have a sweet day Anne-Lise. Thank you so much
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January 17, 2017 at 7:15 AM
Good morning Chris, I must say your title alone caught my attention. I really enjoyed how you did this. Great metaphors. What a beautiful "morning" you created. It looks so good. And I have sudden craving for some fruit.A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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January 17, 2017 at 9:09 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend for always leaving such nice comments for me
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