Marks

Tattoos and whiskey
Cigarette marks on her skin
Footprints on sand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Tidd Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 10:31 PM
Hopefully the footprints are running away from this abuser.
Boddie Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 2:46 PM
mary jane and gin....hiccups and munchies surpreme....passed out on sofa....just a haikued response....but yours is nicely done amrita....;)
Jha Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Yours is too! Thank you for the appreciation :)
A  Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 5:21 PM
Love it. SKAT
Jha Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 8:01 AM
Thank you so much SKAT, your encouragement is much needed and appreciated, thanks :)
A   Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 2:16 AM
Hi Amrita, well I love everything about the Haiku. From footprints to whiskey. The marks are deep.... I love this haiku. LINDA
Jha Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 8:02 AM
Hi Linda, I'm glad you do. Just an attempt at this form which I'm not much acquainted with. Thanks :)
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