Market Square

Busy piazza, 
Amidst angry sun
And cacophonous sounds such as,
"pipipi peepee" and "bonanza! bonanza!!",
Calling all to answer,
Nagging market women,
Causing palaver.
Pedestrians roaming.
Every man to his own
Yet who knows who?




CHARLESMELODY
(Lightning Ink).
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Bangalee Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 3:38 AM
thoughtful expression-Every man to his own/ Yet who knows who?
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 2:00 AM
Thank you so much Martab Bangalee
Deo Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 2:43 PM
Thanks for this PICTURE, Lightning. Shalom shalom- Peace from THE Prince of Peace!
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
April 14, 2019 at 7:22 AM
You are welcome sir. :)
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 6:02 AM
I can just about picture it, the color of clothes, the vibrant hues of the produce, the nagging market women, you have brought the market square to life. Awesome write....Maria hugs
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 9:05 PM
Thank you so much ma. I will do better having such encouragement. :)
Melugin Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 11:48 AM
Charles....You made me feel there...in market Square! You word painted a picture and I could hear every stroke of your brush! Excellent!
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 1:44 AM
Wow.. Thank you Chuck, I am humbled Sir.
Vangaveti Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Wow and that's an intelligent capture of reality :)
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 7:58 AM
THANK you Swetha, i really appreciate.
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