Marionettes of Pied

You motormouths, that pull the strings of life,
Marionettes of Pied that seek confusion.
Your piper teeth are chattering with strife,
Like a Jedi, with wave of hand delusion
“Come one! Come all!” the ringleader twists knife.
The press buries the truth, besets illusion.
The circus clown smiles whilst Hans-ing fairy whales,
Marionettes of Pied with Moby-Dick-sized tales.

3/27/2023

Just having fun creating an Ottava Rima

*Hans as in Hans Christian Anderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 4:44 PM
This was sure a cool poem, Kim. Thanks for the HANS note
Rodrigues Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 7:12 PM
Thank you! Had fun crafting it!
Turner Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 11:35 AM
My interpretation is you are talking about the meia, Kim. Probably wrong. Ottava rime is a very tough form but I am glad you are having fun.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Oh just snippets of the mind to form a poem. I wanted to use this form with some feminine endings. Thanks, Daniel!
Lillico  Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 11:32 AM
Awesomely creative, with good size literary references:)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 12:25 PM
Thanks, Margarita! :)
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