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Marionettes of Pied

You motormouths, that pull the strings of life, Marionettes of Pied that seek confusion. Your piper teeth are chattering with strife, Like a Jedi, with wave of hand delusion “Come one! Come all!” the ringleader twists knife. The press buries the truth, besets illusion. The circus clown smiles whilst Hans-ing fairy whales, Marionettes of Pied with Moby-Dick-sized tales. 3/27/2023 Just having fun creating an Ottava Rima *Hans as in Hans Christian Anderson

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Date: 3/27/2023 4:44:00 PM
This was sure a cool poem, Kim. Thanks for the HANS note
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2023 7:12:00 PM
Thank you! Had fun crafting it!
Date: 3/27/2023 11:35:00 AM
My interpretation is you are talking about the meia, Kim. Probably wrong. Ottava rime is a very tough form but I am glad you are having fun.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2023 12:26:00 PM
Oh just snippets of the mind to form a poem. I wanted to use this form with some feminine endings. Thanks, Daniel!
Date: 3/27/2023 11:32:00 AM
Awesomely creative, with good size literary references:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2023 12:25:00 PM
Thanks, Margarita! :)

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