Lee Ramage Poet Verse

Marionette

Wooden arms, 
vanilla legs 
dance on
Prague’s cobblestones,

painted eyes 
haunt 
the musical sway.


Written by Lee Ramage
September 23, 2012
For Nette Onclaud’s contest
Septolet the Puppet

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Erich Goller October 3, 2012 at 3:08 PM congratulation on your win, a beautiful expressed poem, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Poet Destroyer A September 29, 2012 at 12:50 AM Lee, Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's "SEPTOLET THE PUPPET" show.. I had fun following her contest... always~ PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 28, 2012 at 8:15 AM Big congratulations Lee xx

Carol Sunshine Brown September 28, 2012 at 5:34 AM Congratulations on your win in this "Septolet The Puppet" contest Lee. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson September 27, 2012 at 5:40 PM Very descriptive. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2012 at 5:09 PM This one was one of my favorites and I would like to have seen it higher placed!! Congrats on your win, Lee.

Barbara Gorelick September 27, 2012 at 5:07 PM Vanilla legs" is outstanding. Congrats on your success...BG

Joann Grisetti September 27, 2012 at 2:22 PM Congratulations on your winning poem. I like the vaniulla legs - mine feel like pudding somedays, and this line made me smile.

Kash Poet September 27, 2012 at 1:53 PM Beautifully written!!Loved this Lee.Congrats on your win.

Debbie Guzzi September 27, 2012 at 1:53 PM Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 26, 2012 at 10:25 PM CONGRATS LEE ON A TREMENDOUS WRITE AND WIN LUV ..

Carrie Richards September 26, 2012 at 3:09 PM Oh my........how much do I love this....just beautiful, and I can picture it so well. (I would place this higher....just my opinion...) Nicely done, Lee. Congratulations on your win and talent!

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2012 at 9:33 PM wow. one of the best I've seen. I LOVE how you used the flavor of vanilla in yours.

Joann Grisetti September 23, 2012 at 12:48 PM I have enjoyed reading all of the poems for this contest. Every one is special because each poet has thier own arrangement of the 14 words. I like the way you isolated 'haunt' - gives it more power. Lee Ramage September 23, 2012 at 1:14 PM Thanks Joann for your kind words. I find the poems that restrict the number of lines/words are more difficult than others. Appreciate your feedback. Lee