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Marilena

The first time I saw Marilena
she was wearing a dull dress
under an ill-fitting jacket
and her hair was in braids

I got up early as I always did
To catch the school bus
For that long trek
So when lunch hour struck
It was my time to
Relax and sit back
Listen to the popular grade 7 clowns
Spiel their daily standup comedy show

It was the same day after day
Then one lunch
A side group
Invited me to join them
Of course they were the nerds
And Marilena led the group

She was interesting and strong
I liked her and it was tempting
Until I came across lazy four eyes
Who stared back as if
She needed me to entertain her
I just didn’t have it in me
I’m sure I misread her but I knew
They would have wanted
Something from me
More than just sitting
There on the sidelines
Being the wallflower
Not contributing and not being noticed

I always remembered that as a pivotal point
Where I missed the opportunity of seeing
Where Marilena and her group might have led me
And what challenges would have expanded my mind



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Posted on November 15, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 11/15/2017 1:27:00 PM
Great introspection, Line! So many things we loop back on. They propel us forward hopefully into the next time...the opportunity not overlooked
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/15/2017 3:22:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Kim. have an awesome day!
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