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Marigolds around the marigold round

roses and roses around
unveiling scarlet drops
echoing voices where
raindrops fall
a rally of imperfection
painted into ..

tapped touches 
sudden whirling whispers
secretively drew blood
prickly feistiness thriving in
haze spun surroundings..

twinkling doves suffocating in 
an angelical sisyphus halo
tender moonlight bringing
an eunoia swiftest remnant 
nemesis against armies
of withering shadows.. 

ebullient blooming daises 
manipulating fluorescent beauties
with a frantic fabricated aurora
in a frantic peony mixture
luxurious mystery somehow
reminiscing rumbling 
engraved doom..

aroused slithering vines
piercing whilst communicating
spitting needles
crystalline skies snickering 
above lands full of
pitiful peonies.. 

but..

sparkling flutter butterflies 
once whispered to me
a soft hymn lullaby;

when ethereality our nature
becomes brutal uncomforting rays
whilst enchanting asters
disguise hiding the
unavailing daises ..

stars, dimmed
dwelling in perpetual 
solitary cycles shewing 
forth agony in pitfalls of clouds..

fragile sagacity dandelions
parched evermore 
darkness grasped a bud
n plucked it from weary soils..

shall it come a time
to flee

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Date: 7/5/2024 11:31:00 AM
Amazing work, Mi Mi! So many deep metaphors and powerful diction-
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Peonieslore xo
Date: 7/6/2024 4:34:00 PM
tyy
Date: 7/4/2024 12:32:00 PM
So poetic and expressed with emotions..
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Date: 7/3/2024 9:22:00 PM
Sounds very inspired, to use metaphors to depict some inner most mystical melodies that needs to be expressed; pleasure reading
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Date: 7/3/2024 3:37:00 PM
you are so poetic, every word brings a floral scent, thankyou for sharing dear Mi mi
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Peonieslore xo
Date: 7/3/2024 5:35:00 PM
floral scent lool

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