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Marigolds around the marigold round

roses and roses around unveiling scarlet drops echoing voices where raindrops fall a rally of imperfection painted into .. tapped touches sudden whirling whispers secretively drew blood prickly feistiness thriving in haze spun surroundings.. twinkling doves suffocating in an angelical sisyphus halo tender moonlight bringing an eunoia swiftest remnant nemesis against armies of withering shadows.. ebullient blooming daises manipulating fluorescent beauties with a frantic fabricated aurora in a frantic peony mixture luxurious mystery somehow reminiscing rumbling engraved doom.. aroused slithering vines piercing whilst communicating spitting needles crystalline skies snickering above lands full of pitiful peonies.. but.. sparkling flutter butterflies once whispered to me a soft hymn lullaby; when ethereality our nature becomes brutal uncomforting rays whilst enchanting asters disguise hiding the unavailing daises .. stars, dimmed dwelling in perpetual solitary cycles shewing forth agony in pitfalls of clouds.. fragile sagacity dandelions parched evermore darkness grasped a bud n plucked it from weary soils.. shall it come a time to flee

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Date: 7/5/2024 11:31:00 AM
Amazing work, Mi Mi! So many deep metaphors and powerful diction-
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Peonieslore xo
Date: 7/6/2024 4:34:00 PM
tyy
Date: 7/4/2024 12:32:00 PM
So poetic and expressed with emotions..
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Date: 7/3/2024 9:22:00 PM
Sounds very inspired, to use metaphors to depict some inner most mystical melodies that needs to be expressed; pleasure reading
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Date: 7/3/2024 3:37:00 PM
you are so poetic, every word brings a floral scent, thankyou for sharing dear Mi mi
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Peonieslore xo
Date: 7/3/2024 5:35:00 PM
floral scent lool

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