Marigold Tongues

marigold tongues
water a flowering seed
as downy hands
mend a crushed bruised reed.

a flaxen shaft
lights a smoldering wick
as a ‘lectric beam
starts a heart’s soft tick

spines in strain
raze a barrier wall
marigold tongues
make a blade stand tall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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September 28, 2022 at 7:21 PM
Still a favorite.
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 12:07 PM
I don't know why but I got a chuckle out of this one..Very creative work..I especially like the second stanza..Let your gift continue to flow onto the pages of soup..Sara
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May 1, 2010 at 11:12 AM
enjoyed,
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