March Stew

Mornings are littered
with gnawed husks,
charred mouse-tails. 

March is burning its strew.
The limbless
braid a thawing earth
into knotty threads.

On wet lines flannel shirts 
poach in a warming smaze. 
while gust-hogs 
still attack the hedgerows.

In coddled kitchens
muggy boiled cabbages
envelope 
a pottage of sky.

Stubby snuffles 
herald undertows 
of new marrow.

April paddles in
with wet crumbs 
and buttercups.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 1:02 PM
I love the imagery and metaphor in this piece; flows really well, too. Wonderful!
Ashford Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 1:37 PM
Much obliged to you for this fine review M.L. K! Always good to get such positive feedback.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 12:57 AM
"On wet lines flannel shirts poach in a warming smaze. while gust-hogs still attack the hedgerows."- your imagery is fantastic, Eric!
Ashford Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 6:52 AM
Hi Caren, I wrote this poem, with my native England in mind, but it's good to know it has a transatlantic application. Thanks for the compliments!
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