March Madness

march madness
                  snow all melted
                        frosted trees raped by the sun

             Dave Austin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mac Donald Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 12:48 PM
Ah Daver, this poem has made me look into the beyond.... Alice and March Hare: Quotes: Alice in Wonderland March Hare: ?Then you should say what you mean. Alice: I do; at least - at least I mean what I say -- that's the same thing, you know. Hatter: Not the same thing a bit! Why, you might just as well say that, 'I see what I eat' is the same as 'I eat what I see'! March Hare: You might just as well say, that "I like what I get" is the same thing as "I get what I like"! The Dormouse: You might just as well say, that "I breathe when I sleep" is the same thing as "I sleep when I breathe"!
Mac Donald Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 11:25 AM
Surely the trees were finding those cold frosted suits had become burdensome? You have mastered the Haiku, which is a feat in itself! Love the image portrayed here.:) Keep well, love, Mikki
Austin Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 9:37 AM
That's how I think any more, little spurts. Love 'n hugs. daver
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 10:07 PM
hi, again, Daver. NO, keep this how it is!! Strong word but it goes with Madness of March.
George   Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 2:11 PM
Good one, Dave! How are you doing anyhow? Your friend, Elaine
George   Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:36 PM
That is one rape that no one regrets. Thanks for making my day, Dave. Elaine
Austin Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Doing fine now that the sun has committed rape. Hardy harr, harr Love, Dave
Dietrich Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 8:31 PM
Gotta love that March madness. Come, sun, and rape the trees harder. heehee
Austin Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:27 PM
I guess rape is too strong a word. How about melt? Love, daver
May Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 8:10 PM
Spring shall reap the dew...nice haiku
La France Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Dave, here to in Canada, the snow is melting and it is wonderful, just like your haiku, I am loving this 7 ~
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