Sneha Rv Poet Rhyme

March Into Spring

His icy grip comes loose at last.
   His blanket cannot but recede,
Like tides that breached a floodgate, he
Her coming can no more impede.

She saunters in, a slow sashay 
      enrobed in freshly scented cape  
that wakes the buds and songbird tune
      as shades of shamrock swathe the scape.
 
It is no place for charcoal greys,
   and barren boughs on colours feed 
Like tides that breached a floodgate, he
Her coming can no more impede.

As much awaited zephyrs blow, 
you sneeze out pollen, heartbeats pep

The season’s vibes can’t help but show..  
A spring for the journal..  spring in your step.

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Carolyn Devonshire February 9, 2019 at 4:58 PM Sneha, this is nicely written and would have placed higher if the last lines hadn't been expanded to encompass all of the words that were once in the 15th and 16th lines. Just threw me off a bit. Congratulations on your win. There were many wonderful entries to this contest and nearly all of them were difficult to rank. Best wishes, Carolyn

Old Man Emu September 19, 2017 at 3:05 PM Well deserved Sneha, beautiful and descriptive poem. Regards, Craig

Ram R. V. August 24, 2017 at 6:29 PM Nice verse, Sneha. I particularly like the personification. My congrats on your win--better late than never! Ram

Gregory Richard Barden August 10, 2017 at 6:37 AM Just wonderful ... what an enjoyable read this morning! Congrats on a well-deserved placement and win! :-)

Jan Allison August 10, 2017 at 4:55 AM many many congrats Sneha:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus August 9, 2017 at 2:48 AM This has been a delight to read, Sneha. Congratulations on yet another merited win! Regards // paul

Janice Canerdy August 8, 2017 at 5:43 PM This is BAUTIFUL, Sneha! Congrats on the win. Janice Janice Canerdy August 8, 2017 at 5:45 PM Oops! Make that b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l! LOL

Nette Onclaud August 8, 2017 at 11:03 AM sneha, giving human attributes to spring delight me!... superb piece from your ink..huggs

Hannah Borke August 7, 2017 at 10:44 PM True poetry

Agnes Krampe August 7, 2017 at 6:25 PM Lovely description of coming spring. I like the personification.

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2017 at 5:23 PM VERY nicely done, Sneha. Cute title and beautiful lines.

Jan Allison August 7, 2017 at 3:49 PM Spring has marched in so beautifully Sneha and your personification is lovely:-) SO great to see you back my friend:-) hugs jan xx Sneha Rv August 11, 2017 at 12:10 PM It is always great to hear from you; thank you so much!

Joanna Daniel August 7, 2017 at 9:57 AM Wow! This is beautiful poetry, Sneha:) great personification:) Sneha Rv August 11, 2017 at 12:09 PM Thank you so much for your lovely comment. :)