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March Into Spring

His icy grip comes loose at last.    His blanket cannot but recede, Like tides that breached a floodgate, he Her coming can no more impede. She saunters in, a slow sashay        enrobed in freshly scented cape   that wakes the buds and songbird tune       as shades of shamrock swathe the scape.   It is no place for charcoal greys,    and barren boughs on colours feed  Like tides that breached a floodgate, he Her coming can no more impede. As much awaited zephyrs blow, you sneeze out pollen, heartbeats pep The season’s vibes can’t help but show.. A spring for the journal.. spring in your step.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/9/2019 4:58:00 PM
Sneha, this is nicely written and would have placed higher if the last lines hadn't been expanded to encompass all of the words that were once in the 15th and 16th lines. Just threw me off a bit. Congratulations on your win. There were many wonderful entries to this contest and nearly all of them were difficult to rank. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 9/19/2017 3:05:00 PM
Well deserved Sneha, beautiful and descriptive poem. Regards, Craig
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Date: 8/24/2017 6:29:00 PM
Nice verse, Sneha. I particularly like the personification. My congrats on your win--better late than never! Ram
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Date: 8/10/2017 6:37:00 AM
Just wonderful ... what an enjoyable read this morning! Congrats on a well-deserved placement and win! :-)
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Date: 8/10/2017 4:55:00 AM
many many congrats Sneha:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/9/2017 2:48:00 AM
This has been a delight to read, Sneha. Congratulations on yet another merited win! Regards // paul
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Date: 8/8/2017 5:43:00 PM
This is BAUTIFUL, Sneha! Congrats on the win. Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/8/2017 5:45:00 PM
Oops! Make that b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l! LOL
Date: 8/8/2017 11:03:00 AM
sneha, giving human attributes to spring delight me!... superb piece from your ink..huggs
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Date: 8/7/2017 10:44:00 PM
True poetry
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Date: 8/7/2017 6:25:00 PM
Lovely description of coming spring. I like the personification.
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Date: 8/7/2017 5:23:00 PM
VERY nicely done, Sneha. Cute title and beautiful lines.
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:49:00 PM
Spring has marched in so beautifully Sneha and your personification is lovely:-) SO great to see you back my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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Sneha Rv
Date: 8/11/2017 12:10:00 PM
It is always great to hear from you; thank you so much!
Date: 8/7/2017 9:57:00 AM
Wow! This is beautiful poetry, Sneha:) great personification:)
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Sneha Rv
Date: 8/11/2017 12:09:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. :)

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