Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Choka

Marathon Drops

MARATHON DROPS

marathon drops jazz
over leaves, roof and human
spray awhile but later flood
oozing lightning rush
like smooch bearing tragic trance
nature's warn to mankind faults?

(c) Olive Eloisa
9:08 pm
September 19, 2014

***This a tiny poem describing one condition brought about by typhoons to our Country: Philippines..

Sponsor	Dr.Ram Mehta
Contest Name	Choka Me 
6rh place.. :)

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Ma Yaseen September 28, 2014 at 4:19 AM Congrats for your win dear. Hugs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 30, 2014 at 1:56 AM thanks Malik.. :) God bless you.. :)

Nette Onclaud September 28, 2014 at 1:49 AM bagyong panalo.. cheers on your stunning win, dear eloi.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 30, 2014 at 1:50 AM thanks much Nette :) appreciate your drop by.. :)

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2014 at 9:36 PM Hey, sweetie, How are you tonight? It's nice seeing you with a win here. Congratulations, and keep those poems coming. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 30, 2014 at 1:49 AM Im trying too Andie.. :) meskeen wasn;t able to make it to your contest.. :( thanks for the support

Faye Gibson September 27, 2014 at 2:16 PM Congratulations, Olive...great description. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 30, 2014 at 1:47 AM thanks much Faye.. :) Appreciate it.. :)

Richard Lamoureux September 27, 2014 at 8:44 AM So sorry for the people effected. Congrats on your win. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 30, 2014 at 1:45 AM yhanks much Richard. :) I appreciate it.. :)

Maurice Yvonne September 27, 2014 at 8:27 AM Congratulations on your win. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 28, 2014 at 1:22 AM Thanks much Maurice..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 27, 2014 at 5:38 AM Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 28, 2014 at 1:21 AM Thank you Dr. Ram..:) appreciate it..:)

Paul Callus September 21, 2014 at 6:32 AM Hi Olive_eloi....hope the bad weather is not being to harsh with you. Typhoons can cause havoc and be fatal. Take care. I am amazed at the new forms which you are tackling with so much enthusiasm! hugs // paul Paul Callus September 27, 2014 at 4:54 AM Hi Olive_eloi!! Congratulations on your win. Once again we stand next to each other on the winners' list!! Better to avoid the typhoons...so best to meet by the Eiffel Tower for a treat:)) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 22, 2014 at 12:43 AM Thanks much Paul ..:) glad you like it..:)

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2014 at 10:09 PM I"ve heard of all the mayhem the typhoons are causing you over there. Sorry you are getting that stuff. That first line of your poem is so original! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 20, 2014 at 11:58 PM Thanks much Andrea.. :) I appreciate your comment.. :) my first line I can't find a word to describe the "strong full volume rain", and came my mind the marathon in sports where there's lots of events requiring strength and endurance, and so that line...

Verlena S. Walker September 20, 2014 at 1:32 AM Superlatively written Olive... Verlena Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 20, 2014 at 7:30 AM Thank Verlena..:)

Poet Destroyer A September 19, 2014 at 6:13 PM Hello Olive, this is deep, and swallows my soul.... I had no idea, ... This tiny poem, shows, much of nature and her warnings.... Love Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 20, 2014 at 7:29 AM Thank you Lollie Linda..:) God bless you always..:)