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Marathon Drops

MARATHON DROPS

marathon drops jazz
over leaves, roof and human
spray awhile but later flood
oozing lightning rush
like smooch bearing tragic trance
nature's warn to mankind faults?

(c) Olive Eloisa
9:08 pm
September 19, 2014

***This a tiny poem describing one condition brought about by typhoons to our Country: Philippines..

Sponsor	Dr.Ram Mehta
Contest Name	Choka Me 
6rh place.. :)

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Ma Yaseen Date: 9/28/2014 4:19:00 AM Congrats for your win dear. Hugs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/30/2014 1:56:00 AM thanks Malik.. :) God bless you.. :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/28/2014 1:49:00 AM bagyong panalo.. cheers on your stunning win, dear eloi.. huggs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/30/2014 1:50:00 AM thanks much Nette :) appreciate your drop by.. :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/27/2014 9:36:00 PM Hey, sweetie, How are you tonight? It's nice seeing you with a win here. Congratulations, and keep those poems coming. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/30/2014 1:49:00 AM Im trying too Andie.. :) meskeen wasn;t able to make it to your contest.. :( thanks for the support

Faye Gibson Date: 9/27/2014 2:16:00 PM Congratulations, Olive...great description. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/30/2014 1:47:00 AM thanks much Faye.. :) Appreciate it.. :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/27/2014 8:44:00 AM So sorry for the people effected. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/30/2014 1:45:00 AM yhanks much Richard. :) I appreciate it.. :)

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/27/2014 8:27:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/28/2014 1:22:00 AM Thanks much Maurice..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/27/2014 5:38:00 AM Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Olive Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/28/2014 1:21:00 AM Thank you Dr. Ram..:) appreciate it..:)

Paul Callus Date: 9/21/2014 6:32:00 AM Hi Olive_eloi....hope the bad weather is not being to harsh with you. Typhoons can cause havoc and be fatal. Take care. I am amazed at the new forms which you are tackling with so much enthusiasm! hugs // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 9/27/2014 4:54:00 AM Hi Olive_eloi!! Congratulations on your win. Once again we stand next to each other on the winners' list!! Better to avoid the typhoons...so best to meet by the Eiffel Tower for a treat:)) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/22/2014 12:43:00 AM Thanks much Paul ..:) glad you like it..:)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/20/2014 10:09:00 PM I"ve heard of all the mayhem the typhoons are causing you over there. Sorry you are getting that stuff. That first line of your poem is so original! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/20/2014 11:58:00 PM Thanks much Andrea.. :) I appreciate your comment.. :) my first line I can't find a word to describe the "strong full volume rain", and came my mind the marathon in sports where there's lots of events requiring strength and endurance, and so that line...

Verlena S. Walker Date: 9/20/2014 1:32:00 AM Superlatively written Olive... Verlena Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/20/2014 7:30:00 AM Thank Verlena..:)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/19/2014 6:13:00 PM Hello Olive, this is deep, and swallows my soul.... I had no idea, ... This tiny poem, shows, much of nature and her warnings.... Love Linda Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/20/2014 7:29:00 AM Thank you Lollie Linda..:) God bless you always..:)